SIN OF BETRAYAL

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"Do you think betrayal never gonna pay back?" Come on let's go and seek it! One line ⬇️ It's a crime thrill... Mehr

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Dum Dum aaro kathakinu thatti njn onnu njetti pinnem thatti.

Kuttan: ara?

Jango: njna

Kutta: entha?

Jango: thurakk.

Kuttan: enthinu vannu?

Jango: adutha chapter um aytt vannatha

Kuttan: ayyo ee shabtham enikk ariyallo?

Jango: njna ningaldey kettiyol jango mwol

Kuttan: ayyo jango mwole entha ividey?

Jango: chettane kaanan Open the doooorrrrrrr

Kuttan: ente what a thamburane ithra vegam vili ketto? Adutha chapter um aytt ketiyol ethi.

Kuttan njodiyil aa kathak thurannu.... Adimudi nokki manass thakarnnu.... Njn onnu njetti....

Ennitt.....?

Jango: Ennitt onnulla va povam

Kothippich👀🥲💥

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Mrng 9: 36 am
At sope residence


Suga: kookiee nee eneekkanille? Holidays anennum paranj phn kalikkanda poyi irunn padikkan nokk....

Kookie: ooh amma.... *half sleep*

Suga: enna njn studio il pova ketto....

Kookie: oh bye bye.....

Suga: ee Penn.... *she just looks at her sleeping princess and give a kiss on her cheeks*

Kookie: *giggles*

Suga left






After a while....

Kookie eneett pallokke thech kulich fresh ayitt vann nere poyi padikkan irunnu ennu njn parayulla. Kochin anganathe mosham sheelangal onnulla...... Aalu fully curiosity adich irikkuva..... Athond nere poyi diary eduth vaayikkan thudangi.








<PAST>

29-04-1993

Mrng 8:47am
At Valiyaparambil House.

.....?:ediii sugeee nee eneekkanundo? Nee innum poyi apology ezhuthan aanu plan enkil clg il ninnum vilippichal njanum varilla ninte daddy um varilla.... Venel eneetto ha....






Ah appo ithanu nammade suga kochinte mummy.
Aalu kurach terror anu ketto. Then one more thing its her step mom.

Name: Mariya Rose Mathayi
Age: as your wish
House wife.




Suga: ooh eneekkuva.... Ayinu samayam ethra aayi? *she wakes up while rubbing her eyes* eh ente karthaave 9 ayooo innum aa moosa de vaayinn kelkkanallo deivamee.....

After a while.

Suga: daddy njn eranguvanee byee....

.....?: enthelum kazhichechum podi....

Ah appo ithanu nammade suga de daddy.

Name: Mathayi Valiyaparambil
Age: as your wish
Owned: 5 Stainless Steel Companies.






Suga: aah enna pinne njn innu full moosa de office il ayirikkum..... *she took a glass of milk and drink it* bye bye.....

*She left to clg*




Meanwhile at
St. Francis clg boys hostel.

~Room no: 106

...?: daa cherkkaaaa ullath ullathpole paranjo evidraa ente chuvanna shedii.....

Ah itharanenn njn eduth parayandallo.
Ah ath thanne nammade ellam ellam aya Paul ettan.






....?: oh pinne ninte aah thula veena sheddi kittitt enikk enthina puzhungi thinnano? *pucham*


Ith aanu nammade swantham Chan ichan.... Paulettante valam kayi um edam kayium okke ingeru thanna...

Name: Chanyeol Lewis
Age: as your wish
Criminology student at St. Francis clg.

Paul: pinne ath evidey poyi?





....?: eh ennatha ividey oru vediyum pukayum okke.

Chan: oh ingerdey chuvanna shedii kaanan illa enum paranj ividey kidann kaaruvaa uff parayane ketta thonnum swarnam kond poyhinja samadhanam pole......


Paul: athey da ninakk okke pucham..... Ath njn ponn pole kond nadakkunne aada..... Nte ponn deivame ath eduthath eth saamadhrohi anelum avan naaranakallu eduth mudi~~~~~ aruth chetta aruth.... *kai cut off*

Kai: enthelum paavapettavanayrikkum ente Paul icha vitt kala..... Pavam jeevich potte.....

Paul: ninakk ingane oru swabhavam pothuve illathe anallo da... Eh.... Evidey nokattee ooredaaa pant....

Kai: ayye angane cheythuooda... Ayye mosham mosham vidu pauletta...

Paul: chaneee ooredaaa...

*chan kai de pant pidich orri*

Chan: arewah! Dhe avante thula veena chuvanna shedii wow.....

Kai: hallelujah praise the lord... *run run run* njn kzhiki onakki thech tharam ichaayaaaa *while running*

Chan: da ah pant nere ittitt erangi poda arelum kand bhotham poyal pinne 14 divasam icu il ayrikum 😹

Paul: eda naarrii ninne njn edutholam. junior ne okke pidich room il kettanda enn njn appozhe paranjatha.

Chan: shey avan oru paavam aada vitt kala.... Nee vanne aa moosaa vann kaanum....

Paul: ooh aaa kalamadanu oru divasam njn elivesham kalakki kodukkum.

Chan: ath onnum elkkulla dey ath koodiya inama...

Paul: athum sheriya va...








Meanwhile at clg entrance.

....? Cls il kerada ellam orotta orennathine njn campus nn veliyil kaanaruth. Get in your classes...

And here is the one and only Moosa. principal of this college.

Name: F. Samuel ( Moosa iratta Peru aanu)
Age: as your wish

A student: sheri mooseee

Athum paranj kurach kuttikal oodi poyi....

Moosa: phaaaaaaa nayinkidavinte mwone.... Oh ente karthave thiruvasthram ittu poyi illayrunnel undallo.....

Ithesamayam Suga oodi pidach varunnund just like a cat.








Sugas POV

Ente karthavee dhoo moosaaa uff enikk vayya ingere kond...... Engane inippo angerdey kayinn reskha peda.... Ah vere vazhi illa mathil enki mathil ithilum valiya mathil chaadi kadannavala ee valiyaparambil Suga.....

Suga nice ayitt poyi mathil keri orotta chaatam....
Pakshe kalangiyilla....

Moosa : entha Mwole mathil il ninnum thaazhott ulla landing okke Sugakaram aayirunnallo alle?

Suga: *karthave pett* ath pinne acho njn.... Eesho mishihakk sthuthiyayrikkatte. 😼

Moosa: oh Eesho tharkkalathekk avidey irikkatt mwol cabin ilott va apology ezhuthandey..... Ath kazhinj oru 100 vattam imposition ullatha vegam vanne come on come on my dear kunjaadey.... 🤪

Suga: ah varuva * kaalaamadaa thannodokke karthav choykkum. Pallilachan ayi poyi allayrunne ente vayinn kettene*🤨











Avidannu cut cheyyth clg ground.

Kai: aliyaa ividey irikkuvano Koch kallaa.....

....?: onnu poyeda njn ividey ezhuthunne ninakk kaanan paadille?

Prethekich paranj tharandallo alle?

Kai: oho appo ninakk njn oru shaliyum ayalle?

Hobi: aah athe

Kai: eh? *oho athrakk ayo mm....ippo sheri akki tharam*

He took his pen and ran away for only choriyan that aduth irikkana hobichan ......

Hobi: shey thyr..... Edaa naariiii ninne njn Inn kolluda panni.... *he starts to kick him*

Kai: eda eda ~~aah ~~~ammachii ~~~~ayyoo eda.... Nee sherikkum kollan povano?

Hobi: *stop for a while* and anenki?

Kai: enikk oru avasana kariyum cheyyan und.

Hobi: eh entha? Ninte kunjammakk vaayikkari idaano?

Kai: alla athilum valiya task aa.....

Hobi: ooh thyre nee innum aa paulichante shedii adichich maattiyallee?

Kai: hehe

Hobi pinnem thallan pidichathum kai eneett oodi...

Kai: ayya da immini pulikkum *while running*

Pakshe kai oodii chenn areyo idich ninnu.



....?: enthuvada nee manushiyane kolluvo.....


Nokkanda ath thanne hobichante valam kayi. Nammade swantham joonichan.....

Jango: eh? Ayisheri appo past ile adayum chakkarayum analle present il keeriyum paambum aytt nadakkunne

Kuttan: athanne enth thenga yo... Bha nokkam...









Kai: eda joone enne ivan ippo kollum...

Joonie: ah nee innum avane ezhuthan vittilla alle? Ninakk enna da? Nee thane anubhavicho.....

Kai: dhushttaa.... 2 um koodey vaayum nokki irunno aa Moosa ippo varum.

Joonie: illa anger aa sugane innum thookki..... Cabin il poytt und....

Hobi: *chuckled* eh innum thookkiya? Nannayi angane thanne venam.....

Kai: ennada poda paavam ko~~~~ ayyodaa athrakk angu olippikkalle mwone *some one cut off*




....? : athrakk sahikkanillel nee poyi imposition ezhuthi kodu.

Ith aanu nammade adutha avatharam..... Hobichante idam kayyi aanu aashan.

Name: Luca Gomez
Age: as your wish

Kai: ooh hobiyee valam kayikk purake idam kayyiyum vannallo

Luca: ayyoda angu sugich....

Kai: ooh... Sugippich kidathatte....

Luca: da mwone kai kuttah vendraa mwone....

Joonie: eda innu first hour ara?

Kai: Jessi mam

Luca: shey pinne enna nokki nikkuva vaa povam..... Avar innu oru pink saree okke uduth vannittund......

Kai: oh ninte premam ippo miss marodu aano? avasanam miss dismissal adich kayyil tharum

Luca: ayinu ninakk entha eh?

Joonie: oh mathi mathi va keram time ayi...... Vada kai....

Luca: ho enthoru sneham.... Da hobi vaada...

Hobi: ah nadakk njn dhe varunnu....





After a while.

Jessie: as your attendance.

Whole cls: 1,2,3 absent, 4................36,37

Jessi: 38?

.............

Jessi: 38 hoseok?

Joonie: eda ninneya.... *joonie kidann urangana Hobi de thalakk itt onnu koduthu*

Hobi: eh ah pr-present miss...

Jessi: *sighs* Nonsense.... Is this your class or any other resting room?  do you know basic manners?

Kai: oh ammachi thudangi.... Eda joone aa pennumbilla presangich theerumbo vilikke good night......

Joonie: ooh ivan

Luca: ente ponno ivarkk ith enthuva. Ravile thane veruppikkanaytt....

Hobi like ennodo Bala enna mattil nippund....

Jessi: bullshit get out from my cls.... Ithrem paranjitta anu enthelum ulupp undo ennu nokkikke....

Hobi: buhahaha njn reskshapett..... Nee okke anubhavikke.... Tattaaa.....

Joonie: eda nee evidey ponu.....

Hobi: poda padippi....

Jessi: be fast.

Hobi: mindathe iri pennumbille povu alle

Jessi: what? Idiot.

Hobi: ah ningal dey kettiyon *while walk out*

Jessi: OK listen. Today we are discussing about....

Luca: ooh mood poyi mood poyi....

Joonie: *sighs in frustration*





Meanwhile Get out kittiya Hobi therapara vaayum nokki nadakkuva.... Appo anu purath irunn thakarth imposition ezhuthunna nammade sugane kanunne.

Hobi: eh ithaaru Poocha kuttiya?

Suga: mwon ingu vanne athinulla marupadi njn tharam...

Hobi: oh ivale kondu entha?

Suga: Poocha ninte mattavalu.....

Hobi: nee aredi ente mattavale vilikkan? *chuckled*

Suga: ooh ivane kondu valiya shaliyam ayallo... Hobi nee poyikke ninnod adi undakkan enikk samayam illa......

Hobi: ooh ezhuth ezhuth.... Ninnod njn oru aayiram vattam paranjatha nerithe keran.... Ath engana kumbakarni oodu paranjitt kariyum illallo...... Palarem kandittund Pakshe urangan vendi maathram jeevikkunna oruthiye njn athiyum aytt kaanuvaa....

Suga: daaa..... Poda eneett....

Hobi: ooh nammal ille.....



....?: enthuvada 2 um koodey eh?

Ah appo ith aanu nammade Suga kochinte cls mate. 2 Perum nalla company anu..

Name: Jennifer
Age: as your wish


Suga: eh nee enth purath?

Jennie: oh nee ividey kaanum enn enikk ariyam pinne cls il irunn bore adichappo njn ingu chaadi......

Hobi: arewah penpiller ayal ingane venam.....

Suga: oohh 2 um koodey onnu povo enne ezhuthanum vidilla.....

Jennie: aha ippo angane aayo?

Hobi: nee vaadii namakk poyekkam.....

Suga: ah po po.....

They left.




Jennie: alla da adutha week thott lottery anallo?

Hobi: eh?

Jennie: alla freshers varuvalle mwoneee... Ha namakk okke athinu yogam illa.... Pinne seniors ennum paranj kore ennam und enthinu kollam.....

Hobi: edi edi mathi yedi thaattiyeee.... Ninakk aa kai ullath pore? Nee ippo paranjath avan kelkkanda. Kettal kettu kazhinj kettenda chavittum thozhiyum ippozhe kitti thudangum

Jennie: *chuckled* ayyo nte kaichan paavam aa...

Hobi: uvva uvva. Bhayankara paavam aah...

Jennie: poda angott..... *chuckled*





Time skipps.
8: 56 pm at boys hstl.

Kai: eh ennada nee igane irikane?

Hobi: pinne njn enthe thalem kuthi nikkano?

Kai: uff ee thendi....

Hobi: aliyaa joon enthiye?

Kai: ah avan terrace il poytt kore ayallo?

Hobi: ah njn ippo varam.

Kai: ah povunne okke kollam.... Kuppi vallom undel enne koodey vil8cholanam

Hobi: alojikkam....

Kai sighs.

Hobi left to terrace.





Appo avidey joonie vidhoorathayilott nokki nippund. Hobi oodi chennu tholil kayyittu....

Hobi: ennada mwonuze otakk ninn oru alochana?

Joonie hobine onnu nokki but onnum paranjilla....

Hobi kk something fishy anenn manasilayi

Hobi: ennada enna pattiye? Nee kariyam para aliya.... Ninte hobi ividey jeevanodey ullappo ano nee ingane vidhoorathayilott nokki irikkunne?

Joonie: nalathe divasam ninakk orma undo?

Hobi: eh nale ennatha? Ooh shit nale orma divasam analle?

Joonie: mm avar poytt kollam 17 ayi..... Ha avar reskhapettallo anubhavikkunnath njn alle....

Hobi: eda thendi nee paranj paranj evidey ponu.... Nee nth anubhavikkunenna eh? Ninakk arulle? Appo njn aara da eh ara da?

Joonie: *chuckled in pain* ooh njn onnum paranjille.... Nee ente ellam ellam alle? Mm?

Hobi: hm enna mwon poyi pack cheyy....

Joonie: eh evidey povan?

Hobi: vtl allathe evidey

Joonie: eh appo cls?

Hobi: ooh ingane oru padippi nammal 3 days leave aa... Ingott vaada.....

Angane avar room il poyi.

Hobi: aliya njngal 3 days kaanulle....

Chan: eh ningalu evidey ponu

Hobi: ah ichanum undayrunno? Ah njngal onn vtl pova..... Pinne aa PP (warden) odu paranjekke.... Angere annathe kuli scene vech blackmail cbeyythamathi aalu falt....

Paul: ah ath njngal nokkikolada.... Ningal dhairyam aytt poytt vada pillere....

Hobi: eda kai njngaldey attendance set akkiyekkane mwuthe....

Kai: mm mm.... Appo 3 days njn post alle?

Hobi: adjust karo bettaa.... alla Luca evidey?

Kai: ah avan areyo kaanan und ennum paranj poyatha....

Hobi: ah varumbo paranjekke.....

Kai: ah njn parajeykkam.... Eda pinne varumbo ammachide kannimaanga uppil ittath edukkan marakkalle....

Joon: enthu marannalum ath marakulla pore?

Kai: mathi ponneh mathi....





Ah angane avar pettiyum kidakkayum okke eduth thirichu........

Next day mrng.
8: 36 am at josbeak residence.

Beak muttam adichond nikka. Jos irunnu pathram vaayikkunnu.

Beak: manuahiya orayiram vatam njn paranjitt unde aa pathram idan varunne chekkane pidich iruthi katha paranjond irikkalle enn.... Ath inn pedich veluppine kondittechum poyi....

Jos: ho ee kalath aarodum onnum samsarikkanum pattillalo karthave....

Beak: ah smasarikkunne ninagl anelum vazhakk kittunnath aa kochine alle? Allelum ningal ode paranjite kariyum illallo.... Enth paran~~~~enthanu ravile thanne beaky terror anallo? *hobi cut off*

Hobi: enthanu amma ravile thanne?

Beak: ho-hobii? *she rushed to his son* makkale da enna da oru munnareeppillthe?

Hobi: ath enthe enikk vannudey?

Beak shey da amma angane paranje alla da makkale nthelum okke undakki vekkayrunnnallo atha.... Eh ith aaru makkale jooneee... Ammachi kamdillada vaa daa..... Sho ente Koch angu sheenich poyallo?

Joonie: ah amma....

Jos: makkale joone enna undeda? Ninte padipp okke engane ponu?

Joonie: ah appa nannaytt ponu.....

Hobi: ayisheri edo Jose ningalu enne kandille eh? Njn ano avan ano njngaldey mwon?

Jos: entha samshayam avan thanne....

Hobi: ah athanu matti enganum paranjel chavitti kootiyene njn.... Ammachii poomukathekk one black tea yaa..... *athum paranj hobi keri poyi*

Beak: ee chekkan.... Makkale nee poyi kulich itt va.... Alla ningalu varunna kariyum paranjirunel njn murikalu okke othukki vechenello?

Joonie: ah ath sarayilla amma..... Njn fresh aytt varam pallil ponam....

Jos: ah orma divasam alle? Mm namakk poyi kandechum va.

Joonie: ahm....








Time skips
9: 16 pm at clg

Jennie: eh ith aaru? Innu kakka malarnnu parkkum allo?

Luca: thoo parakkunnu jennie angott nokk kando.... Ente ponn suge ee kaazcha kaanan hobi um joon um illathe poyallo.

Suga: eh avar evidey poyi?

Luca: avar vtl poyi...

Suga: oh.... Ennod parayathe 2 um koodey poyi.... Sheri kanich kodukkam....

Luca: pinne.... Appo avarde kaariyathil oru theerumanam ayi.... Hm.. alla innu vere parupadi onnullel namakk....

Suga: aale vidu aliya...... Ninte ee olippikkal nee poyi vere pillerodu erakk.....

Luca: edi edi senior aadi aa bahumanam thaa....

Suga: ayya bahumanikkan pattiya aalu..... Nee vaadi namakk povam....

Luca: podi po nee ente aduth thane varum....

Suga: ~~~ooh agane varendi vanna njn chenn theevandi kk thala vecholam...

Luca: *chuckled* eeh pennu.....




Agane Avidannu cut cheyyth oru palli semitheri. Avidey oru grave inte front il joonichan nikkund.

Joonies POV

Appaa ammaa..... ningalk avidey nalla sugam ayirikum alle? Onnum ariyandallo..... Njn hobi de koodeya vanne... Mm avan ente life il illayrunnel ithinu munne njn angu vanne *smiles in pain* Pakshe ee thendi sammathikkilla enne.... Pinne ividey ellarkkum sugam anu ketto. *he tries to not cry but ee feelings onnum athikam pidich vekkan pattillallo* Joonie de kannu nirayan thudangi. He close his eyes and feel the moment. Appo pettann aardeyo shabtham joonie kettu...

~~~da nee ennada ingane Koch pilleere pole eh?
Amma paranjitt ille ingane karayalle enn... Ente mwon bold alle...... Hobi okke ille nannaytt padich valiya oru officer avanam *laugh in care*

Joonie just smile. A drop of tear fall from his right eye.

Ithokke appurath ninnu Hobi kanunnundayrunnu.

Joonie: I promise amma appa..... Njn ellardem munne jeevicha kaanich kodukkum.... Annu enne orphanage il kondu thalliya avardey okke munnil njn jech kaanikum..... I promise..

Joonie melle thirich nadannu Hobi de aduth vannu.

Hobi: da nee OK alle?

Joonie: ha da OK anu *while wipe his tears*

Hobi onnum mindathe just hugs him. And slowly pat his shoulder.

Hobi: onnulla pottee avanokke namakk vere pani kodukkam..... Annu mungiyath alle pinne pongiyillallo? Kariyum ninte appante aniyan okke ayirikkum but he cheats you..... Ath njn shemikkulla....

Joonie: ah nee shemikkanda.... Va povam enikk vishanitt vayya ammachi paalappam undakki vechekkannu paranj....

Hobi: ayi sheri enitt njn arinjillallo...... Ooh allelum ningal 2 um onnu anallo..... Hm va va ....

Angane avar tholil tholil kayyiyum itt vtl ott poyi.....

(Joonie um hobidey parents ne appa ennum amma ennum anu vilikkunne don't get confused ok)






Time skipps
At josbeak residence.

Beak: engane undeda joonee.....

Joonie: oh ethra naal ayi last month leave nn vannapo kazhichatha.... Ente ponne oru rekshayum illa.....

Beak: kettoda ente Koch parayunne?

Hobi: ooh pinne onnu poye thalle.... Vaayil vech kazhikkan kollulla....

Beak: nee allelum angane parayullu enn enikk ariyam..... Nee kazhikkeda makkale *looks at joonie*

Joonie: *chuckled*





Time skipps.
10: 57 pm

Hobi (OTP) : shey ennitt.... Sho njn illathe poyallo deivamee....

*appo Joon angott keri vannu.*

Hobi: eda joonee nee arinja aa poocha innu nerithe cls nn poyenn...

Joonie: eh? Loka avasanam ayo da aliya......

Hobi: theerchayayum..... Mikkavarum avasanikkum....

Joonie: *sighs*

Hobi: eda luce njn ninne pinne angott vilikkam ketto.

*call ended*






Hobi: eda nee ippozhum ingane chath kuthi irikkuvanallo enthanu ninte preshnam.

Joonie: onnulla da....

Hobi: enna va namakk onnu karangeett varam appo nee OK avum.....

Joonie: oh venda eda preshnam illa....

Hobi: preshnam und..... Nokk enikk ente aa pazhaye thallipoli joon ne thirich venam.... Njn kore ayi sredhikkunnu.... Annu ninte aa thendi uncle intem family dem pic aa magazine il vannath kandappo thott ninakk thudangiyatha ith..... Eda ninte appante property um adich maatti avan ithra okke cheyythath nee ayond aa nokki kond nikkane..... Njn ayurunnel thalli konnene.... Sathiyam paranja aa orphanage ile sister ne venam parayan avar alle ellam ninnod paranjath.... Avarkk enthinte keda... Onnum arinjillel nee ingane vedhamikunnath enikk kaanendi varillayrnu...

Joonie: avar ath ennod parayan enthelum reason kanum.... Athukondu entha enikk atleat ente appanum amma um ara ennu enkilum ariyallo ath mathi da... Pinne avar enth veno cheyyatt enikk oru chilli cash polum venda..... Enthayalum avar enne kond akkiya orphanage deivam sahayich nannayirunnond njn innu ithrayokke vare ethi..... Allayrunnel enikk ninne kittum aayrunno da.... *joonie de kannoke niranju*

Hobi: ah kollam kollam nalla dialogue adutha mohanlal padathil namakk ith kodukkam.... Ippo mwon vaa namakk oru pani und....

Joonie: entha?

Hobi: vaadaaa * he grab him*

Hobi: appaa njngal aa car edkkuvane.......

Oru pazhaya model vintage car anu.... Uff aah kaalam oke thanne ayrnnu alle better... No phone no Internet..... Full time vibe il nadakkam🤌🏻



Jos: ah edutho

Beak: nilleda avidey..... Evdra pone ee paathiraathri kk....

Hobi: oh ente thalle ente ponnu thalle oru ara manikkoor nn akath thirich vannolam.....

Beak: aara da thalla? Enikk athra parayam onnum aytt illa.... Samayathinu vannillel anu irikkunne ah....

Jos: avar poytt varatte di...

Hobi: ooh thamburatti..... Angane paranj kodu appa....

*Namseok left*

After a while.

2 um koodey car il irunn beer adi aaah..... And hobi adich kindiyayi😂🤭

Joonie: eda nee vandi edukkanda njn edukkam.....

Hobi: angott maari nikkeda kocherukkaa..... Njnee Jos inte mwonaa enikk ardem sahayam venda.... Enna enn choykk

Joonie: eh entha?

Hobi: bcoz I'm strooongggggggg like superman ~~~aaah

Joonie: ooh athrakk okke veno?

Hobi: kerada kerunnel

Joonie: *sighs*

Hobi: pidichirunnoooo......

Joonie: eda pathukke poda naariii.....

Hobi (while driving) : eda nee erangi 4 spray paint medikk.....

Joonie: edaa ath veno?

Hobi: venam.... Ennitt nee poyi aa thendi paranari mathayi de kada full paint adich kulam akkanam...

Joonie: eh ath enthinu aa suga enganum arinja ninne valich keeri ottikkum....

Hobi: ooh pinneeee...... Aval njottum..... Aa kalamadan enne kanumbo enna oru chorichil.... Angerdey chorichil namakk mattandey chakkareee.... *he pinch on his cheeks*

Joonie: ooh ivane kond..... *joonie car nn erangi poyi paint vangichond vannu.....*

Joonie: eda nirth ninte future ammayi appante shop ethi.....

Hobi: phaaa aa moorchiye aaru kettum.... Enikk venda nee edutho...

Joonie: ah enna njnkettikolam....

Hobi: eda pulle konnu kalayum njn.....

Joonie: nee alle paranje?

Hobi: ayya njn angane palathum parayum huh vaada chakkare namakk paniyam.......

Joonie: eda eda nee enthuvada ee kanikkane mullanel angott maari ninn mullikkodey

Hobi: alla da njn puniyaham thalikkuva....
Aii swaaahaaa *cough*

Joonie: eda ith pani ane dhe nokk CCTV

Note: ith nadakkunnath 1993 il anu.... I think 1995 il anennu thonnunnu india il CCTV varunnath.... Whatever ningal angott adjust cheyy.....

Hobi: evidey evidey ahhhh *hobi athinte front il poyi ninnu* edo koppile mathyi dey mwone... Eh wait angane allallo OK aa mwon cut cheytho.... Thanik ennado enne kanumbo oru chorichil? Thaan nokkikko ee aayishkkalam full njn ningale sahikkendi varum.... Oops sry ningal enne.... Aare? Enne.... Ee hoseok Joseph kuruvilaye.... Sahikkendi varum..... Ningale mwole njn angu kettum ennitt thanne mudippikum..... Thaan enne kaaaranam sahikettatt valla pottakinatilum chadi chavum..... Nee okke koodey avale manasikam ayi peedippikum alle..... Sugu....ente sugu..... Aval ente penna... Ee hobi de pennu... Avale enganum thotta nee theernn eda mathnga thalaya.... Mudinj povuado thaaan ha....

Joonie: *chuckled* eda vaada vaa....

Hobi: paitraaffxxxbb....

Joonie: enthonn?

Hobi: nakk ulukkiyatha chakkare...... Va namakk paintam..... Painty Painty njn angerkk ente sneham manasil akki kodukkum appo anger enne snehikkum..... Enitt aa poocha ye enikk kettich tharum 😼

Joonie: illenkilo

Hobi: ayale njn kollum.... Enatt ente pennine erakki kondu varum🤓

Joonie: eh? 😂

Hobi chithra rajana thudangi athum suga de appante shop il.....

Jango: edo manuahiya onnullelum thante ammayiappan alle do?

Kuttan: ath thanne...

Hobi: eh ath evidunna oru ashariri? Eh arediii nee.... Joonee nokkeda pretham pretham.... 😳

Jango: oh njn pretham onnum alla.... Ningal dey future il ninn time travel cheyyth vannatha...... Njngal sarvaviyapikala Elladathum kaanum.....

Kuttan: athe thoonilum thurumbilum kaanum.....

Hobi: ooh appo avidunnayrunnalle ee deivam..... Namaskaaram..... *kayi kooppi ninnu*

Kuttan: eh deivo?

Hobi: ah angeru alle ee kanda thoonilum thurumbilum okke keri irikkane? Am I right Mr?

Kuttan: yeah kuttan.

Hobi: yes Mr kuttuuuuuuu

Kuttan: kuttu alla kuttan

Hobi: ath ennada kuttu enn vilicha eh? Kutttuuuuu chakkare thakkudu.....

Jango: oh ingott va manuahiya ath adich kili poyi nikka......




Appo pettann

Joonie: eda police..... Vaa vaa mathi mathi Vaa... Oodraa....

Hobi: oooooohhhhhhhhhh~~~

Joonie: kidann koovathe da koppee....

Deshi run run run.......

Hobi: ooh oru police..... *thuuuff*

Hobi vazhil kedanna etho vandide purathott thuppi.

Joonie: ivane kond

Car driver : you b**tch

Jooniee: sryyyyyy chettaaa🥴

Hobi: daa njn car eduthond varam nee oodi vann kerane......

Joonie: ah nee poyi vandi edu njn avanmare nokkikolam.....

Hobi vandide aduthekkum joonie nere um oodi.... But joonie chenn nere avanmarde vaayilott keri koduthu....

Joonie: sabaaashh....

Hobi: ~~~~edaaa vaadaaa vann ker oodiii vaa....

Joonie: sry sireee vere vazhi illanjitta..... Time nn vtl keriyillel ammachi olakka edukkum... *athum paranj joonie police inte mukham adach orennam angott koduth....

Then joonie rushed to the car and get in....

Joonie: edraa edraa vandi edu...... 😬

And *car left*














Ithokke kand kili poyi nikkana hobi

Hobi: eh tattaaa.... Alla avan aardey koodeya aa poyeee.... Ayyooo daaa chakkareee njn tha varanedaa... Ninne Thatti kondu povan njn sammaykoooooooola...... I'm coming.......

Hobi joonie poya car nn purake vech pidichu.

Jango: kuttetta enthuva ippo nadanne?

Kuttan: joon ardeyo koodey keri poyt und... Thamburanu ariyam....

Note: ningalkk thonnaam diary il ingane detail aytt ezthuvo ennu.... Maybe ezhuthunnavar undelo? Pinne enikk verthe past aardelum POV il paranj story theerkkan thalppariyum illa.... I want to give you the clear vision of past that's why njn past um ingane idunne ketto..... 🤌🏻❤️







~~~~~~edi kookieee

Kookie: shey appan avidey undayrunnallo appo anger aarde koodey aa keri poye?

Beak: samayam ethra ayi ennkando nee?

Kookie close that dairy and took her phn.

Kookie: deivame.... ~~~~ah njn tha varuva.

*Kookie step down to downstairs*



Beak: kaappi eduth kazhikkedi.... Nee enna edukuvayrunnu....

Kookie: oh njn vaayikkuvayrunnu

Beak: enthonn?

Kookie: diary

Beak: eh?

Kookie: ah alla po-portion English ile oru diary de portion atha....

Beak: mm eduth kazhikk....




Time skipps
2: 37 pm at jinhit clg.

Yoongi um Jackson um library il irikkuva.

Yoongi: ninnod njn appozhe paranja angerdey cls scene aa cut adikkanda ennitt ippo enthayi ini angerdey cls nn kernel parents ne vilichond varanam.

Jack: oh inippo exam theernnal pinne 2 month kazhinj alle ullu.... Appozhekkum anger marakkum....

Yoongi: ah maranna kollam.... Eh edi ~~~pinkyy

Pinky: eh ah entha chetta......

Yoongi: nee um ninte koottukarim koodey enthokkeyo parayanam ennum paranj poytt? Ee edaykk vallom parayuvo? Enik anel ingane suspense idunne ishttam alla... Athond entha ennu vecha para...

Pinky: ah ath.....

Yoongi: nee kariyum parayunne para....

Pinky: onnulla soofy kk oru dare kitti. Proposing. Aval choose cheyythath chettane ya.... Appo annu propose cheyyan vannatha....

Jack: sho just miss....

Yoongi: ath entha aval enne choose cheyythe?

Pinky: bcoz she likes you.

Yoongi: oho.... Appo ente ooham thettiyilla... Mm.. ennitt enthe pinne parayathe?

Pinky: ath pinne... Ji-mini chechy....

Jack: jiminiya?

Yoongi: avalkk entha ithil kariyum? *cold voice*

Pinky : *explained annu nadanna kariyungal*

Jack: *cough* k-kettiyol aa? Athokke eppo da yoongi ennitt njn arinjillallo? Mm... Mm.... Nadakatte mwoneee

Yoongi:.............

Jack: eh scene anallo *mind voice* edaaa

Yoongi: soofy evidey?

Pinky: chetta venda jimini chechy ith chettanod parayaruth enna paranje.

Yoongi: soofy evidey?

Pinky: *flinched* I-ippo vilichitt varam

She left..


Pinky poyi soofy ye vilichitt vannu.

Yoongi: va....

Soofy: venda yoon~~~ varan *yoongi cut off*

Yoongi: jacksa nee aa mattavale ingu viliche....

Jack: *sighs* shhh shhh enwooo

Enwo: eh? Ennada?

Jack: jimini ye onnu viliche

Enwo: edi chimmi ninne ya....

Chimmi: eh aru? Ah ivana




Chimmi cls n purath poyi... Appo anu avidey yoongi yem koodey soofy yem kandath.





Chimmi: mm entha? *cold voice*

Jack: ah at~~~~ nee aradi eh? *yoongi cut off*

Yoongi: nee aara ivale nilakk nirthan? Avalkk enne ishttam anel ninakk ennadi? Eh ninne enna njn kettiye? Njn arinjillallo? Dhe nokk penne... Ninte vilichil ingott edakkalle ha avasanam karanjond nadakkendi varum.... Ninte vilachiloke kaanan vere alkkar kaanum.... Ath ingott erakkanda. Ketto di.... Ninte over smartness okke angu churutti madakki pocket il vecho.... Ini melal.... Ini. Melal ee jathi pani kanicha... Ha.... Ee yoongi arenn nee ariyum....

*le chimmi

Chimmi: *smirk* kazhinjo? Enna ketto.... Njna ningale kettan povunne.... Ival enn alla vere enthelum oruthidey purakenn poyenn enganum njn arinja... Pinne ee dialogue onnum adikkan ningalu indavilla *calm tone* odich madakki valla potta kinattilum kond idum njn * shout at him while grab his collar* njn palarem thechitt undavum... Athokke njn pani edukkathe ingott valinj keri varunne aah... But nee... Ninne njnaytt kaathil erangi pocket il akunne aah... Ithil ethavalde enkilum nizhal pathinj ennu njn arinja mwone poocheee nee theernnu.....




*le yoongi

Jack: best.... Pavanaayi shavam ayi.... 🌝

Chimmi: athukond ippo nalla kutti aytt mwon cls ile pokkee..... *clearing his shirt*

Athum paranj aalu keri angu poyi.....

Yoongi:.........

Jack: ennathada ippo nadanne.... Nee vanna varavokke kandappo avale eduth eriyum enna vichariche..... Ippo ninne kanda sherikkum poocha thanna..... Mala pole vann ippo poochaye pole ayi🤭🤣 bha ninnu viyarkkathe povam...

Yoongi onnum mindathe poyi.

Pinky: soofy nee va... Ith scene aah....

Soofy: edi ooodikko sheri chetta congrats paranjekk ketto

Jack: oh ayikotte pengalmare...

They left....





Jango: ah atha ningalkk nallath...

Kuttan: namakkum.




After a while.

Enwo: edi inippo avan ithinte peril enthokke preshnam und akkan povano? Enthayalum nee ini onnum parayan povanda.

Chimmi: illa ini onnum parayilla.... Ini cheyyan alle pone....

Enwo: eh?

Chimmi: chimmi kali thudangeett alle ullu..... Angere njn vellam kudippikkum.....

Enwo: evidey chenn nikkuvo aavo......

Chimmi: wait n see mwole....






Time skipps
8: 36 pm at namjin residence.

Hyung: eda thendi kalla kali kalikkalle...

Felix: poda njn onnum alla....

Joonie: eda kalla..... Nee thanna kalla kali kalikkane.....

Felix: kand pidich kalanj Koch gallan...

Joonie: alla da ninte frnd nn engane und?

Felix: eth frnd?

Joonie: eh etho frnd nn accident ayilee? Tae paranj

Felix Tae ye nokki.

Tae: *kannadach kaanichu*

Felix: ah ah frnd aa kuzhappam illa uncle...

Joonie: ah ennayalum aa 15k ath nee vecho..... Oru nalla kariyuthinu allayrunno....

Hyunglix: 15 K aaaaa??? 😳😳

Joonie:??

Tae: *ooh nashippikkum* eda ninkonnum vtl kerarayille? enett poda poyi 2 aksharam padikk..... Pothu pole valarnn avanmar irunn eniyum paambum kalikkanu....

Joonie: 🙄😲

Ath kettond vanna chimmi um jinnie um njetti nikka like Tae thanne ano aah paranjath enna mattil.....

Chimmi: uff romanjam.... Entha dialogue...

Jinnie: ente mwon thanne alle aah nikkunne....

Tae: alla pinne... Athe maathasree athe nom thanne....

Hyung: u-uncle enna njngal eranguvane. Eda vada ini ninna avan nammale pidich kadikkum.

Felix: ennalum 15 k yo..... Ooh kodeeshwaran.... Vada povam... Sheri aliya

Tae: mm mm po vegam...

Hyunglix left




Jinnie: enth pani aada kaanichhe kochungal onnum kazhikkathe poyi.....

Tae: oh ath sarayilla..... Kochungal oru neram pattini kidakkatte...

Jinnie: nee kazhikkanille?

Tae: illa njn vayikitt puratheen kazhichitta vanne.

Tae room il poyi....


Enitt felix ne vilichu....

Call connect ayathum...

Felix: phaaa naariii njn eppozha da athrem cash vaangiche malare.....

Tae: eda ath njn annu kookiee kk surprise kodukkan.....

Felix: ah nee avale njettikkan cheyythath ippo sherikkum njettiyath njnaa.....

Tae: eee sry da aliyaa.... 😁

Felix: ayyada poranjitt avate kore valicha upadheshavum..... Ninte veedayi poyi... Illel mwone innu ninne njn nakshathram ennichene.... Mm nee phn veyi njn drive cheyya....

Tae: sry chakkare..... ah sheri. Nee ethitt vilikk....

*call ended*






Tae nere kookiee ne vilichu.

Kookie: halo?

Tae: ah evidey nee aa dairy um pokki pidich poyit..... Ippo nammalod samsarikkan polum samayam illa alle?

Kookie: ente vayinn kelkkalle kaduvee aaah....

Tae: *chuckled* mm ennitt enthayi vallathum kittiyo dairy il ninnum......

Kookie: ente ponne ente appanum ammayum thallipoli aayirunn avardey clg il.....

Tae: haha ath enikk pandey manassil ayatha.... Nee avardey carbon copy thanna mwolee.....

Kookie: taeichaaa

Tae: illa illa.... Nee mwuth aanu mwuth.....

Kookie: ayyada sugichu sugichu.....

Ha angane avar avidey irunn sollatte namakk poyekkam....

Privacy mukkiyam bigilee...




Avidey ee chapter theernnu💜




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