OS -
Title : 3/5
The Title is could have been different, there is nothing unique in it.
Cover + blurb : 9/10
Cover is beautiful no changes in that. Blurb is quite good too.
Originality + Creativity : 7/10
The plot is'nt original one but the author has moulded it in her own way along with bring in her creativity and working on it.
Character development : 17.8/20
It's nice as all the characters are given equal importance but the drawback is reader's can't connect with them emotionally, you don't feel for them as the author has intended to do.
Grammar : 20/20
There are no grammatical errors or spelling mistakes so no improvement needed.
Interaction with Readers : 5/10
The interaction with the reader's is very very less.
Draw : 5/5
The plot is really interesting one which makes the reader's instantly a part of it and the world the author has created.
Overall impression : 18.2/20
Overall it's a beautiful story totally justified the title though it could have something else, as it doesn't creat that kind of excitement by just seeing it.
Total : 85/100
Title : 4/5
The Title is interesting but not unique giving in what's it all about.
Cover + blurb : 8/10
Cover is nice but wish the author had shown some creativity in it. Blurb is interesting and intriguing.
Originality + Creativity : 10/10
The plot is very much original and the author has perfectly depicted it with her own creativity in it, bringing in something new and different.
Character development : 17.8/20
It's nice as all the characters are given equal importance but the drawback is reader's can't connect with them emotionally, you don't feel for them as the author has intended to do.
Grammar : 20/20
There are no grammatical errors or spelling mistakes so no improvement needed.
Interaction with Readers : 5/10
The interaction with the reader's is very very less.
Draw : 5/5
The plot is really interesting one which makes the reader's instantly a part of it and the world the author has created.
Overall impression : 18.2/20
Overall it's a beautiful story with a beautiful message in its fold. Enjoyed it!
Total : 88/100
Title : 1/5
The Title is'nt impressive at all, can't understand what's it all about.
Cover + blurb : 5/10
Cover is not impressive too, it's made in a very haphazard way with no creativity nothing. Blurb is intriguing and different.
Originality + Creativity : 5/10
The plot is original one haven't read anything on it before, but it lacks creativity.
Character development : 17.8/20
It's nice as all the characters are given equal importance but the drawback is reader's can't connect with them emotionally, you don't feel for them as the author has intended to do.
Grammar : 20/20
There are no grammatical errors or spelling mistakes so no improvement needed.
Interaction with Readers : 5/10
The interaction with the reader's is very very less.
Draw : 3/5
It instantly doesn't draw in reader's, it takes time which might disinterest a reader and they might leave it in middle.
Overall impression : 15/20
Overall it's a nice story but the author does need to work on it as it has great potential.
Total : 71.8/100
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SS -
1) It's Destiny We Fall For Each Other by Raya763
Title : 2.5/5
The Title is nice but could have come with something else as it's too long..
Cover + blurb : 1/10
Cover is not at all impressive, no creativity nothing, it feels like a picture had been placed and nothing else, no author's name too on it. Blurb is not there for to know what's it all about.
Originality + Creativity : 5/10
It lacks creativity though the plot seems original and a bit different not entirely though, but it's a nice effort on the author's part.
Character development : 12/20
It's impressive and it's been shown properly but the author still needs a lot of improvement in this department.
Grammar : 8.5/20
There are lots of grammatical errors and spelling mistakes, a reader might feel disinterested in it.
Interaction with Readers : 7/10
The author has interacted with almost all her reader's but needs to work up a bit more on it.
Draw : 2/5
I didn't felt that much needed draw in the book. Although the plot is a gripping one but somewhere it feels the story is stuck at a place and the author seems confused at that point in the story.
Overall impression : 12.5/20
Overall it's a good story but as I mentioned earlier this points doesn't hold up a reader's interest for a long time. Needs a lot of improvement as it has a great potential.
Total : 50.5/100
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LS (FF) -
1) Scars Do Heal by RaShi_Anonymous
Title : 5/5
The Title is just great giving in what the story is all about, amazing.
Cover + blurb : 10/10
Cover is beautiful gelling well with the story. Blurb is intriguing and gripping that one needs to check it out immediately. Lovely!
Originality + Creativity : 10/10
It's a beautiful story and how the author has weaved it's strings together not letting It go haywire with bring in her own creativity in it's place. It's really a nice effort from the author.
Character development : 17.9/20
It's impressive and it's been shown properly with giving importance to each and every characters in the story, connecting the reader's with them but still a bit more work is needed on it.
Grammar : 15/20
There are no grammatical errors or spelling mistakes as such but yes it has lots of sentence formation errors, along with the writing style which needs to be changed, with giving space in between the write ups. (In the sentence/dialogues)
Interaction with Readers : 7/10
The author has interacted with almost all her reader's but needs to work up a bit more on it.
Draw : 5/5
It instantly draws in the reader by just looking at it's blurb and there on there is no looking back, you get yourself drawn in the world the author has so lovingly created.
Overall impression : 17.3/20
Overall it's a amazing story which I really loved it and the way it's shaping up. The points I mentioned above for the author, needs to work on it.
Total : 87.2/100
2) Falling In Love by qwerty12345ind
Title : 4/5
The Title is interesting but emojis are not required.
Cover + blurb : 4.5/10
Cover is not at all impressive, no creativity nothing, plus it's going out of the required dimension. Blurb is intriguing for one to check it out immediately.
Originality + Creativity : 8.9/10
It's a interestingly woven plot with a lovely twist and creativity at it's fore but yes the author does to need to focus on their emotional part.
Character development : 17.6/20
It's impressive and it's been shown properly with each characters getting importance, but do need to work on their emotional trauma.
Grammar : 8.5/20
There are no grammatical errors or spelling mistakes just here and there but the writing style is confusing which makes the reader disinterested in it.
Interaction with Readers : 5/10
The interaction with the reader's is very very less.
Draw : 4/5
The plot is a gripping one instantly making reader's a part of the world the author has created.
Overall impression : 17.4/20
Overall it's a good story but as I mentioned earlier this points doesn't hold up a reader's interest for a long time. Needs a bit of improvement as it has a great potential.
Total : 69.9/100
3) An Eternal Love Story by qwerty12345ind
Title : 4/5
The Title is interesting, giving in whats it's all about.
Cover + blurb : 4.5/10
Cover is not at all impressive, it's just a picture has been placed and nothing else no author name too. Blurb is intriguing for one to check it out immediately.
Originality + Creativity : 8.9/10
It's a interestingly woven plot with a lovely twist and creativity at it's fore but yes the author does to need to focus on their emotional part.
Character development : 17.6/20
It's impressive and it's been shown properly with each characters getting importance, but do need to work on their emotional trauma.
Grammar : 7.7/20
There are grammatical errors but no spelling mistakes, and the writing style makes one confused as to whats going on.
Interaction with Readers : 5/10
The interaction with the reader's is very very less.
Draw : 4/5
The plot is a gripping one instantly making reader's a part of the world the author has created.
Overall impression : 16.7/20
Overall it's a good story but as I mentioned earlier this points doesn't hold up a reader's interest for a long time. Needs improvement as it has a great potential.
Total : 68.4/100
4) Made For Each Other by JoDude11
Title : 5/5
The Title is quite unique one telling in what's the story is about.
Cover + blurb : 7.8/10
Cover is lovely but I wish the author had worked on the texture and color as no creativity is seen in it but it's a lovely effort from her side though. no creativity nothing, plus it's going out of the required dimension. I wish the blurb was a bit more elaborated but still it did created that kind of excited in the air.
Originality + Creativity : 10/10
The plot is very much original and the way the author has worked on her creativity bringing in the character's and the story is great.
Character development : 20/20
It's really impressive and the author has made her character's unique too in their own way connecting with the reader's that you feel for them.
Grammar : 19.3/20
There are no grammatical errors or spelling mistakes but the author does need to work a bit on the writing style though.
Interaction with Readers : 10/10
The interaction with the reader's is great so no improvement.
Draw : 5/5
It instantly draws in the reader's by the intriguing plot making the reader's a part of the story itself.
Overall impression : 19.4/20
Overall it's a beautiful story that one just can't miss checking it out. You feel for the character's and their situation. I enjoyed it just the points I mentioned needs some focus, otherwise it's just great.
Total : 96.5/100
5) Perfectly Imperfect by JoDude11
Title : 5/5
The Title is really interesting one. Keep it up!
Cover + blurb : 6.9/10
Needs to work on the cover, it's not impressive, no creativity at the fore. Blurb is nice but wish it was a bit more elaborated.
Originality + Creativity : 8.9/10
It's a different and unique plot working on such sensitive topics requires a lot of courage. The author's creativity is also there making it in her own way, the focus not changing a bit.
Character development : 20/20
It's really impressive and the author has made her character's unique too in their own way connecting with the reader's that you feel for them.
Grammar : 19.3/20
There are no grammatical errors or spelling mistakes but the author does need to work a bit on the writing style though.
Interaction with Readers : 10/10
The interaction with the reader's is great so no improvement.
Draw : 5/5
The plot is really interesting one which makes the reader's instantly a part of it drawing in them from the very first chapter.
Overall impression : 18.9/20
Overall it's a wonderful story that one just can't miss checking it out. You feel for the character's and their situation. I enjoyed it just the points I mentioned needs some focus.
Total : 94/100