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Neil khanna and his girlfriend.
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Shot 2 - Love and Hurdles
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Shot 1 - Love and Hurdles

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Delhi
Railway Station.

We can see a boy in his mid twenties is sitting on his reserved seat beside window of Rajdhani Express.

He loves to travel in a train.
Moreover,it's just a matter of 4hrs from Delhi to Jaipur.
His charming smile is too attractive and lovable to look.
He is smiling remembering and thinking about something things.

He is wearing a Military Jogger and a white Tee-shirt.
He is looking dashing and he is the most handsome man.
And here comes the Neil Khanna.

Oopss....sorry..
IPS Neil Khanna.
An Orphan who lost his parents.
Right now,he is busy in day dreaming and smiling at himself.

Neil's pov..
Kya aankhe thi....bass doobne ko mann kar raha tha jab meine uski ankhon mein dekha tha.
Kasam se,aaj tak meine aisi ladki ko nahi dekha.
Aur jab dekh hee liya tho kho gayi.
Kho gayi uske khaale bade ankhon mein.
Aur vo muskurahat....ahh....
I can die for that smile.
Jab se koshish kar rahi hoon ye ladki meri dimag se chal hee nahi rahi hain.
Kya jaadu kardiya usne.

Agar hum phirse mile na...bass nahi chodunga.
Pata nahi number bhi nahi puch paya meine usse.
I was soo Nervous.
Ohh...haaa...sab sochte honge ki akhir vo ladki kaun hain...
Avni.
Avni Mehta naam hain uska.
Bohot koobsurat hain vo.
Bilkul ussi tarah uska Mann bhi bohot koobsurat hain.
Dil ek dum bachi jaisi hain uski.
Pov ends .

Flashback

Delhi
Blu Marina Hotel.
It's a grand wedding.
In the entrance it is written on a floral white board "Riya Weds Ali".
Hotel full of guests and looking like a colourful world.

Priest is chanting mantras.
Only groom is present there and waiting for bride to come.
Neil and his other friends standing in the side and talking and smiling pulling each other legs.
After all they met after a long gap.

And then,the sound of anklets and giggles made his attention.
He snapped his head towards the direction and stunned.

There he saw Avni for the first time.
A beautiful smile on her face and giggling while teasing Riya.

He just drowned in her beauty.
While his friends are busy with talking eachother,he got busy in his own work apart from them.

Rohan : Neil.
Rohan called him but neil didn't responded.
He is only looking at Avni.
Rohan : Ohh..hello...ACP.
Still...
All followed his direction and smiling at eachother.
Rohan : Ohh bhaiii...kho gaya ladki pe.
Dekho Aisa dekh raha hain.
Neil is really out of world.
Rohan jerked his shoulder again calling him.

Rohan : Neill...
Neil snapped his head at him
Neil : H..haa..kya hua?
Rohan : Ye baat hume puchna hain.
Kaha khoye ho??
Neil : Mein...??
Pagal kahi ke.
Mein bass dekh raha hoon shadi.
Rohan : Haa dekha hain hum sabne ki tum shadi dekh rahe ho ya kahi aur??

Rohan and others laughed.
Neil looked away in an embarrassment.
Rohan : Pasand aayi ladki??
Neil : Shut up.
Kya bole ja rahe ho yarr..
Rohan : Arre...bolo na.
Ab hume kya chupa rahe ho.
Neil khanna ko ladki pasand aana bohot mushkil hain.
Tabhi tho ab tak single hee reh gaye tum.

Neil : Rohann..
Rohan : Yess...
Karan : Arre Neil,tum na bilkul tension math lo.
Ham sab comitted hain already.
Tumhare love mein hum se koi bhi beech mein nahi ayenge.
Tho bolo koi madad chahiye tho.

Neil is glaring at them.
Everyone is laughing.

But Rohan stopped laughing and looking at the direction.

Rohan : Arre ..chup hojao aap.
Dekho vo arahi hain.
Chup ho jao sab.
Neil is not facing her now.
Avni is facing his back.
All of a sudden he felt goosebumps on his body.
Rohan : Neil dekho arahi hain vo..
Yahi chance hain dekho aram se....aur kuch tho baat karo.
Kam se kam ab tho single se committed ban jao yarr.
Itna handsome hone ke baad bhi tum ko single nahi dekh sakte hain hum.

The sound of anklets is increasing by the distance decreasing between them.

Avni is distributing flower petals to everyone to shower them on the Groom and Bride during Varmala.

Neil slowly turned and looked at her who is only a few steps away from him.
His heart beat started increasing.
She looked like an angel.
Rohan : Yarr..Neil...Sach mein bohot pyari hain ye ladki.
Sach bol raha hoon...
Dono ek dum perfect lagenge.
Rohan whispered in Neil's ear.
Neil has a thin smile on his lips.
Karan : Arre rukh aagayi vo..

Avni forwarded the petals tray to them.
Rohan,Karan and others took flowers from the tray.
Rohan : Thanku.
Karan : Thanku.
But neil stood there like a statue adoring her.

Avni : lijiye na.
Avni said to Neil.
Neil came out of trance.
Neil : H..haa...yess..
Neil took those petals and smiled at her.
Avni smiled back.
Avni about to move...

Neil : Excuse me...
Avni turned back
Neil : Aap ka naam??
Avni : Avni.
Avni Mehta.
She said while smiling.
Neil smiled at her.

Neil again fell for her.
The way she said her name while smiling is really a sparkle to his heart.

Avni : Acha abhi aati hoon aa...mujhe na ye sab ko dena hain.
Aapka naam mein baad mein puchungi
Neil : Aaoge sach mein??
Avni : Haa aaungi na.
Neil : Thik hain jao.

Avni left from there.

Rohan : Ayee.hayeee...
Kitni pyari hain ye ladki...sachi mein

Neil is smiling looking at her.
Neil : Pyari tho hain.
Karan : Aur usne kaha ki vo phir se ayegi.
Neil mokha math chodo yarr...

After Neil eyes never left her in between the wedding.
The way she is respecting elders and forwarding the drinks and food for them attracted him the more.
Sometimes she used to play with children.
He thought that she had a great respect for others.

Neil (in mind) : Soo kind.
He is all smiling looking at her.

*********
The wedding was done with a happy ending.
But neither Neil nor Avni didn't got a chance to meet eachother.
Avni is busy heading back to her place and packing her things.
She forgot about Neil.
Neil searched for her a lot but didn't found her anywhere.
He could ask someone about her,but he felt that they might think something weird when a boy asks about a strange girl.
He thought to ask Ali later.

Next day.
Everyone is going back to their places again as the wedding is Completed.
And Neil too left from the hotel with a disappointment as he didn't got a chance to meet her.

Flashback Ends.

Neil's pov.
And I'm sitting here now.
Usne kaha tha ki vo mujhe phirse milegi lekin nahi aaya.
It's ok mein Ali se bata karvaunga.
Suna hain vo Riya ki Dost hain.
Lekin sach mein vo meri dil aur dimag se nahi ja rahi hain.
Pov ends.

Present

Train started to move.
And then he heard a voice.
Someone is shouting from the platform to stop the train.
Neil looked out from the emergency window immediately.
His eyes popped in a happiness and his happiness has no boundaries.

At the same time he felt soo funny and hilarious when he heard her that she is shouting to stop the train.

He immediately rushed towards the door and snapped his head out.
Avni is running and trying to catch the train.
Neil : Come on...fast...
Avni looked at him.
She smiled.
Avni : Tum??
Neil : Haa mein..
Ab baate baad mein jaldi hath do..
Avni increased her speed of running.
And finally he held her hand and pulled her inside the coach.

Due to that pull and the force he used,they both stumbled back and sticked to the door.
He held her by waist while her hands on his chest.

For the first time he witnessed a girl with a close proximity.
He felt like a heaven when looked at her beautiful and gorgeous face.
He met with her eyes.
She is looking at him innocently,while he is drowned into her.

Avni moved back a little.
Neil left her looking away.
She smiled at him.
Avni : Thanku soo much.
Neil : It's ok.
Waise tumhara coach konsa hain??
Avni : Coach tho yahi hain par seat dekhna hain.

Saying this she opened her mobile to check her ticket.
Avni : Yes..it's 13.
Side lower.
Matlab window seat.
Yayy...
She said in an excitement.
Neil : 13??
Avni : Haa..
Neil is dancing in his mind as his seat number is 12 which is side upper.
Avni : Kya hua??
Neil : K..kuch nahi.
Mera 12 hain.
Avni : woww..sach mein.
Neil : Haa.
Avni : Thankgod.
Journey tho boring nahi hogi.
Hum der saare baatein kar sakte hain ab.
Neil.smiled at her.
Avni : Chalo ab.
Avni moved before Neil looking for her seat.

Both settled in their seats.

Neil : waise kaha ja rahi ho tum?
Avni : Jaipur.
Mein Jaipur se hoon.
Neil : Woww.. coincidence.
Mein bhi Jaipur se hoon.
Avni : Sach mein??
She asked him excitedly.
Neil : Haa.
Aur tum uss din kaha tha na ki phir se mujh se miloge??
Avni : Ohh...haa..
Sorry.
She said cutely holding her ears.
He couldn't help himself from admiring her.
Neil : It's ok.
No problem.
Avni : Lekin dekho na...what destiny had made?
Hum akhir mil hee Gaye na..
Neil smiled.
Neil : Do u believe in destiny?
Avni : Haa ofcourse I believe.
Waise Aap ka naam kya hain?
Neil : Neil.Neil Khanna.
Avni : Acha naam hain.
Neil : Tumhara bhi.
Avni : Thankyou.
Neil smiled.
Neil : kya karte ho tum?
Avni : Mein MBA final year padh rahi hoon.
Aur aap?
Neil : Mein IPS officer hoon.
ACP.
Avni stunned and shocked.
She looked at him from top to bottom.
She never witnessed any police officer being in this way.
Avni made an innocent face.
Neil : Kya hua??
Avni : V .vo...
She started stammering.
Neil : Aree ...tum achanak itna dar kyun rahe ho?
Avni : Mujhe police se dar lagti hain.
Neil : Kya??
Neil started laughing.
Avni,sach mein mujhe dekh ke dar lag raha hain tumhe??
Avni is looking at him like an innocent.
Neil : Don't worry.
Waise police se kyun darte ho tum?
Avni : Pata nahi.
Lekin aap ko dekh ke nahi lagta hain ki aap ek police officer ho.
Neil smiled and took out his purse showing his ID card.
Avni looked at that ID card and smiled nervously.
Neil : Darne ki koi baat nahi hain Avni.
Relax.
Avni smiled again.
Avni : Lekin aap IPS ho na train mein kyun travel kar rahe ho?
Neil : Aap se tum tak aagayi ??
Avni : Vo...aap ACP hain tho..
Neil : Haa tho...
Pls Avni.
No formalities.
Avni : Acha thik hain.
Neil : Yess be normal just like a normal persons.
Avni smiled and noded.
Neil : Actually mujhe train ki journey bohot pasand hain.
Public vehicle tho hoti hain...lekin I like to be myself.
Avni : Ek baat puchu??
Neil : Haa pucho na??
Avni : Shadi Hui aapki?
Neil stunned by her sudden question.
Neil : Noo...he said slightly chuckling.
Kyun??
Avni : Kuch nahi bass puch rahi hoon.
Neil smiled mentally.
Neil : Aur tum??
Avni : Mujhe dekh ke aap ko shadi shuda lag rahi hoon?
Neil : Nahii...
Haa boyfriend tho hoga na??
Neil is trying get some info about her relationship status.
Avni : Boyfriend??
Avni started laughing.
Neil (in mind) : Hayeee...
Avni : Koi boyfriend nahi hain.
Single hoon
Neil : Hmm....bilkul meri tarah.
Neil have a hifi to Her.
Why r u single till now?
Avni : Pata nahi..
Bass ab tak tho zindagi padai pe chali gayi.
Lekin ab tho padayi mein bhi interest nahi aa rahi hain..
Lekin jeene ke liye padna hain.
Neil laughed at her.
Avni : Aur aap single kyun ho??
Neil : Ab...aise hee.
Achi ladki nahi mili tho...
Kabhi vakt bhi nahi mila hain.
Avni : Achaa..

Like that they started speaking to eachother.
They didn't noticed how did the time passed upto 3hrs.
And they almost reached their destination.
Last few minutes,there is an awkward silence between them.
None of them talked to each other.

Meanwhile,Neil wanted to ask her number but he is nervous.
The train already arrived on the platform.
They both got off from the train.

They looked at eachother smiling.
Avni : Bye..
Neil supressed his lips.
Neil : B..bye.

They turned to their directions.
After walking some steps,he turned to her.
To his surprise she is already looking at him.
Neil smiled.
Without wasting a minute he ran to her.
Avni is smiling.
Neil : Hum dono ek hee city mein reh rahe hain tho..
Kabhi kabhi mil sakte hain na hum?
Avni : Bilkul.
Neil : Agar mujhe tum se milna hain tho??
Avni frowned.
Avni : Itnaaa struggle kyun kar rahe ho.
Seeda phone number nahi puch sakte??
Neil smiled looking away
Neil : Lekin mujhe lag rahi hain ki mujhe se jyada tumhe meri number ki jaroorat hain.
This time Avni looked away.

She took out the pen from his bag.
She held his hand and written her number on his palm.
All this while Neil is looking at her stunning.
He is looking at her lovingly.

At last she smiled slightly and turned around to leave and started moving.
Neil is smiling scratching his neck..
He took out his mobile and he dailed her number.
Avni checked her phone and smiled.
She turned back and passed a smile at him.
Neil smiled at her back.
Neil : Ab number kaunsi naam se save Karu??
Ye bhi tum hee batake jao..
Avni couldn't help from smiling all the time.
He shouted.
Avni : I don't know Amrood.
Neil stunned and looked around at the people.
Some are smiling at him.
Neil : Amrood??
He whispered to himself.
He turned around and left from there.

Continues......

How is this????

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Hope everyone loved this one.
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