KUCH TO HAI TERE MERE DARMIAN...

By Ssdevan

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This story is based on balveer returns .I am not satisfied by story and characters .So I am writing on my own... More

character sketch
proclaim
A MYSTERIOUS DREAM
DEBANYA MEET
A DILEMMA
A PUNISMENT
A New start
A NEW PAYING GUEST
A FAN GIRL
AN ACCIDENT
The Truth
THE BALVEER
A SUSPENSE
THE SUSPENSE PART 2
TIMNASA ESCAPE
A HIJACK
VIVAN'S PLAN
A KIDNAPPING
MYSTERY MAN ENTRY
MISSION BEGAN
A RIDDLE
DEV IN ANANYA'S COLLEGE
A DANGER AND A DOUBT
24 HOURs
KARMA RETURNS
EK INTEZAR
A BELIEVE AND A BETRAYAL
one step ahead
ANANYA'S TRUTH
A TRAP
Ek Jhalak
A Firing
DARD
KAAL KILVISH
ATTACKS
THE TIMNASA
Ananya and Shaurya Meet
Nursing DABBU
ANANYA'S CONFUSION
A DREAM
Dabbu is balveer
A PUNISHMENT
EK KHULASA
REASON
Ananya's past part 1
A PROMISE
KARELA
DEV'S LIFE IN DANGER
An unknown letter
RESTLESS VIVAN
LORI
STONE STATUES
Dabbu and vivan
SOLVED BUT UNSOLVED
Balveer v/s nakabposh
A NEW ENTRY
Kaal veer
BALVEER RETURNS
Ananya and nakabposh last meet.
A new conspiracy
Dev's jealousy
Baal Pari and Ananya
A Surprise
Dev and Ananya day out
Ananya is in Danger
A New Enemy
Water Problem 1
Vivan Identity Revealed
Water Problem 2
Reunion
INTERCHANGED
Dance party 1
Dance party 2
Dance party 3
MILSA'S CONFESSION
SAWAL
Confusion
Jhalak 2.O
DATE
A wish
Voting
Dev's past part 1
Baal veer's past 1
Covers😃😃🙏🙏
Attack on Pari lok
Timnasa and Balveer Fight
UNCONSCIOUS DEV
Kaal Sastra
Veer Diwas
THREE MAGICAL WORDS
DREAM GIRL
Realisation
Its Birthday
Birthday Party
Someone's Arrival
Shaurya
MAR JAU YA JI LU JARA
And Its not over yet
ITS BACK

Angry Ananya😠😠

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"Ye nhi ho sakta" Announced Dev sternly wiping smile from her face which he doesn't like.
Ananya-"kyu?mai veer lok kyu nhi jaa sakti"
Dev-"samajh ne ki kosis karo Anu .Veer lok me aise hi koi bhi nhi ja sakta"
Ananya-"matlab mai tumhare liye koi bhi hu"
Dev-"mera Matlab wo nhi tha Anu. Per mai tumhe veer lok nhi le ja sakta"

Ananya-"kyu ?kyu nhi le ja sakte. Veer lok me to tumhara hi order chalta hai na .
Dev-" to iska Matlab ye thori hai ki mai jo chahu wo karu. Agar mai aisa hoga to mere aur timnasa me kya antar rahega.
Ananya-"mai wo sab kuch nhi janti .Tumne promise kiya hai"

Dev-"Aur tumne cheating. Vishwas ka galat fayda uthaya hai tumne"

Ananya-"to mai kaun sa tumse Adha veer lok mang rahi hu. Keval mujhe ghumna hai waha"

Dev-"ha ,veer lok nhi wo pass wala garden hai na jaha se mai tumhe ghuma kar lau"
Ananya-"ha to veer lok jane ke liye tumhe kaun sa ticket lagega dabbu.Jo nhi le ja sakte.
Dev-"Aise hi veer lok nhi le ja sakta tumhe .Pariyo ki ,saurnhi ki dooba -Dooba ki marzi jan ni hogi. Unhe tumhare veer lok ane se koi aapti hai ya nhi.Possible nhi hai Anu.

Ananya-"Abhi abhi tumne process btaya aur ab possible nhi hai

Dev-"Ananya tum samajh kyu nhi rahi ho?
Ananya-"mujhe kuch nhi samajhna .Mujhe Veer lok jana hai Matlab jana hai. Aur jab tak tum mujhe veer lok le kar nhi jaate mai tumse baat nhi karungi."😠😠😠
Saying this she left from there with teary eyes like a child who want his favourite chocolate but can't get it.

Dev-"kya jarurat thi isse veer lok ke bare me btane ki?
Vivan-"ab to bta diya."
After that Dev tried his best so that she would talk to him.He brought Ice creams for her but she ate whole ice cream without speaking a word silently conveying that she is angry with him not with ice cream.He also tried some stupid jokes but it is of no use and at last he tried to irritate her but his all attempts failed.

Vivan-"Baat mano partner Didi ko ek baar veer lok le chalte hai na.
Dev(sarcastically)-'Ha sure .VEER LOK ANANYA KA SASURAL HAI NA.(nhi hai per banega jarur😜🙂🤗)

In veer lok
Baal veer explain everything to baal pari.
Baal veer-"Bilkul bacho jaisi jid kar rahi hai maa.Ab aap hi use samjhao.thori bhi paripakwata(maturity)nhi hai usme.

Baal pari-"apke iss baat se hum bilkul bhi sehmat nhi hai .Mana ki ananya chanchal hai per utni hi gambhir bhi hai.bilkul samundra ki tarah uper se jitna ashant ander se utna hi sant.bas jarurat hai to gehrai(depth) me jane ki

She is not wrong .He know that she is not immature and he feel that .It is just because of situation due to which he said those words.He is just frustrated as Ananya's silence is irking him.
Baal veer-"janta hu maa .per abhi samundra me jo toofan aya hai uska kya karu?
Baal pari laughs .She can't believe this her son, The Baal veer,who patiently fought with every problem is frustrated just because Ananya is not talking to him.She look at his son.

Baal pari(in mind)-" sayad humara sochna galat nhi hai.Ananya bhi bilkul waise hi Zid kar rahi hai jaise....."

Baalpari -"baal veer hume lagta hai ki Ananya ki baat man leni chahiye"

Baal veer-",per maa ye veer lok ke niyam ke virudh hai"
Baal pari-"apko bhi to rani pari ne pari lok ke niyam ko badal kar pari lok me rehne ki anumati di thi"
Baal veer-"wo baat alag thi maa.Pari lok  meri niyati thi"

Baal pari-"Ho sakta hai veer lok Ananya ki niyati ho "

No one can understand the game plan of destiny.Who knows what is the plan of destiny and how it will execute. She knew it very well .Once destiny teaches her that .

In kaal lok
Timnasa is standing somewhere in front of someone.
Timnasa-""To Ananya tumhari beti hai.Bahut tarpe hoge na Tum tum itna salo tak apni beti ko mera gulam ke roop me dekh kar.
Someone-"wo kabhi nhi tumhari gulam nhi thi timnasa
Timnasa-"meri kaidi to thi na.itne saalo tak use dard se tarpta dekh kar bhi tum kuch nhi kar paye aur na ab kuch kar paoge.

So how was the chapter?
Timnasa kis se baat kar rhi thi?
Baal pari kya soch rahi hai?





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