| Location | England |
| Birthday | Dec 27 |
| Member Since | Jul 21, 2012 |
| Votes Received | 328 |
I'm always appreciative of constructive criticism. If you've read either of my stories please leave your feedback, and if you like what you've read please remember to vote. Thanks for taking the time to look at this page.
![]() | ROAD TO NOWHEREShort story. A one page thriller about two girls on the run. |
![]() | DISCOVERING ESIENEABella discovers the secret lands of Esienea. They are ruled by a committee of elves who have spent many years in the company of her late grandfather. Bella is welcomed... read more |
hello there! :) thought you'd might like to read my new science fiction book. Its my first ever attempt to write a science fiction one. Hope you like it and others. It would be greatly appriciated :) Here's the link: http://www.wattpad.com/story/4413600-the-humanoid-project *Hope you enjoy
Hi i was wondering if you could check out my book Teenage Dream ? I d be really thankful :-)
oh haha that's funny on my phone I can send things but you can't read what you have send.
??? So I the message what I posted a minute ago was not the right one. It had to be --> It's really a nice story. I really wonder how the story would end. So far it's very nice/good. X ps; I would love if you could post another part of Road to nowhere.x \(^_^)/\(
It's really a nice story, I really wonder how the story would end. So far it is very nice / good. (Road to nowhere) x ps; I would love it if you could post another part. ( no rush ;) ) X \(^_^)/\(
YOU ARE WELCOME
Yes, that helps a lot. Thanks so much!
@KGTomasz Hello, welcome to Wattpad. Try advertising in the 'share your story club' and you can get some feedback in the 'critiquing club.' Also make sure you add descriptions to your stories, you do this in 'my works' under 'manage.' Hope this helps. :-)
@sayoingreece Thank you, would love to know what you think of Discovering Esienea. Thanks a lot for fanning and reading. :-D
Road To Nowhere,not bad for a short story.Maybe could have been a little bit longer to round it off a bit better I thought....6.5/10.I'll read your other one.