Lclaire

Location England
Birthday Dec 27
Member Since Jul 21, 2012
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I'm always appreciative of constructive criticism. If you've read either of my stories please leave your feedback, and if you like what you've read please remember to vote. Thanks for taking the time to look at this page.

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ROAD TO NOWHERE

ROAD TO NOWHERE

1 page, updated Nov 20, 2012PGCompleted
Short story. A one page thriller about two girls on the run.
7,325 reads votes 222 comments 136
DISCOVERING ESIENEA

DISCOVERING ESIENEA

5 parts / 8 pages, updated Nov 12, 2012G
Bella discovers the secret lands of Esienea. They are ruled by a committee of elves who have spent many years in the company of her late grandfather. Bella is welcomed... read more
2,035 reads votes 106 comments 112

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AllieL
AllieL

2 months ago
hello there! :) thought you'd might like to read my new science fiction book. Its my first ever attempt to write a science fiction one. Hope you like it and others. It would be greatly appriciated :) Here's the link:
http://www.wattpad.com/story/4413600-the-humanoid-project
*Hope you enjoy 


3 months ago
Hi i was wondering if you could check out my book Teenage Dream ? I d be really thankful :-)
ScoobyDOOxX
ScoobyDOOxX

3 months ago
oh haha that's funny on my phone I can send things but you can't read what you have send.
ScoobyDOOxX
ScoobyDOOxX

3 months ago
???
So I the message what I posted a minute ago was not the right one. It had to be -->
 
It's really a nice story. I really wonder how the story would end. So far it's very nice/good. X

ps; I would love if you could post another part of Road to nowhere.x

\(^_^)/\(
ScoobyDOOxX
ScoobyDOOxX

3 months ago
It's really a nice story, I really wonder how the story would end. So far it is very nice / good. (Road to nowhere)
x

ps; I would love it if you could post another part. ( no rush ;) ) X

\(^_^)/\(
andrewoneill
andrewoneill

5 months ago
YOU ARE WELCOME 
KGTomasz
KGTomasz

5 months ago
Yes, that helps a lot. Thanks so much!
Lclaire
Lclaire

5 months ago
@KGTomasz Hello, welcome to Wattpad. Try advertising in the 'share your story club' and you can get some feedback in the 'critiquing club.' Also make sure you add descriptions to your stories, you do this in 'my works' under 'manage.' Hope this helps. :-)
Lclaire
Lclaire

5 months ago
@sayoingreece Thank you, would love to know what you think of Discovering Esienea. Thanks a lot for fanning and reading. :-D
sayoingreece
sayoingreece

5 months ago
Road To Nowhere,not bad for a short story.Maybe could have been a little bit longer to round it off a bit better I thought....6.5/10.I'll read your other one.

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