JMason0206

Chapter 4 of My Name is Charlie and this is Their Secret is posted - I've also added a completely new story "The Phoenix Stone" needs some adjustments its something I wrote ages ago - but as you can tell Phoenix is something that I definitely identify with lol it needs a bit of an adjustment to NOT mimic My Name Is Charlie --- but read it let me know what ya think!

JMason0206

Chapter 4 of My Name is Charlie and this is Their Secret is posted - I've also added a completely new story "The Phoenix Stone" needs some adjustments its something I wrote ages ago - but as you can tell Phoenix is something that I definitely identify with lol it needs a bit of an adjustment to NOT mimic My Name Is Charlie --- but read it let me know what ya think!

Duni4life

hey just became ur fan! can u plz, plz read my short story called 'the deadly temptation' only like 1 chapter hope u enjoy it! feel free to vote n become my fan im only 13 so i would love if u could give me feedback to get better! ur a great writer yourself goodluck with ur books!

aiswaryablue

hey, I just started writing recently and have finished 4 chapters. 
          
          It is about 2 girls Jen and Aria who have been  best firends.One is a shy,introvert while the other is quirky and fashion forward. When a new guy arrives at their school, will the best friends turn bitter enemies or will the new guy turn out to be a player. 
          
          Plzz read and vote and I would luv to hear an insight on my CHAPTERS

JMason0206

@lollagirl It was very helpful!  Feel free to tackle anything else that you think needs adjustments lol Its hard when its your own work - I've gotten to a point with one of my pieces that I'm like "Ok I've read and read and read it -- I dunno what to do with it---Next?"  lol I also never write under the delusion that SOMETHING in a piece can't be improved :)  I know I'm not perfect but readers like you help make me better!  :)  And for that - you are truly AWESOME :)