so far so good :) definitely going to read more of this, I like where it is going :) your writing is really good as well, basically flawless!
I like how you introduce the people in her world just as she sees them instead of stating them all at the start. It's a rather nice chapter.
I really actually like your first chapter, it has good detail that depicts certain things. You have my vote!
I like the cover, it seems to fit the story well. Oh and good luck in the Wattys!
Very well done. I love the description used. You are a good writer, keep up the good work!!!
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| Name | Kristen |
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