I love anything Haiku related and this one is practically me. keep up the writng!
totally my kinda poem.. :)
i loved it..
expressing loads thru such a few lines.. VOTED !!!
I love that you so so much in a short poem...That is the true key to clarity and dept.
Son- Iphone, daughter- ipad, mom- ipod, Dad- ipaid!
A picture i saw on the net.
KK this poem is good except for the second line where you seem to have put two pronouns for one.either its her or your
so short yet so powerful <3 this was beautiful and had such a sad/hopeful feel to it <3 no critique, just simply loved it <3 (:
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