Oh, death poem. ;-; Sad, but I like the very ending. "Soul deep." Very nice and creative.
This type of poem i loved calling a one liner stuff..very direct and it makes my mind think...awesome one..voted
totally my kinda poem.. :)
i loved it..
expressing loads thru such a few lines.. VOTED !!!
I love that you so so much in a short poem...That is the true key to clarity and dept.
KK this poem is good except for the second line where you seem to have put two pronouns for one.either its her or your
so short yet so powerful <3 this was beautiful and had such a sad/hopeful feel to it <3 no critique, just simply loved it <3 (:
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