I actually really like this! The structure and rhythm was very well done, and the rhyme was flawless. Wow. Just--wow.
Wow, I really likes it! I loved how it rhymed and plus there was a story that was unfolding! This was great and i thought it was adorable! Great work :)
AHA, your rhyming sequences tickle me fancy.:)
This is BEA-YUUU-TI-FULL. Stunning. It's, it's, it's so.... COOLIO. ;DD
sigh, that was be-a-u-ti-ful! darn, i never could write poems... what is it about though? cuz it's rlly controversial.
@Silver_Dreams18 - Hehe, yeah! I watched it and I just loved it! :D La Corda de Oro is just plain awesome. I feel like watching it again! xD
This was really good! Keep at it. I didn't know you wrote poetry too? xD That's amazing!
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