Great prologue, can't wait for the rest! I voted Check out my story if you can :)
Good opener, it sets the scene real nice. I'm gonna run and read on the other chapters now : ) I'll comment when I finish these chapters : )
It's alright so far. I think it needs me detail and emotion. I didn't find any grammar errors though, which was great. Keep it up! (:
@eyeofthebeholder lol, aint it?? i wud be like, who cares bowt chagning skwl, im rich!! Good story XD
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