great poem loved how you described both sides the rich and poor. your words help get a picture of the place in my mind although I have never been there.
'In the summer she doesn't see the dark'- what a lovely way of putting it. Enchanting.
Such a sense of melancholy. Perfectly pictured traveller slowing down at the end of a long day, that most beautiful time of all, dusk...
Is there a way to find all the stories the staff are writing? DId I miss a post somewhere that helped map out who is writing what? :)
I hate Jakarta :P ~especially the traffic and the heat.
but I do like your writing style ^_^d
Where's the next poem?? **grins**
@allenlau that's a very pretty city... i don't live in rio .. my dad used to tho :)
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