Travel Diary

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allenlau By allenlau Updated 2 months ago
This is a collection of my poems.  Each poem is dedicated to a city that I traveled to.
sloanranger sloanranger 3 months ago
I love your travel poems - traveling is one of my dreams :)))
AliceMorris7 AliceMorris7 8 months ago
great poem loved how you described both sides the rich and poor. your words help get a picture of the place in my mind although I have never been there.
LeighFelesky LeighFelesky 9 months ago
Enjoyed this and look forward to reading about future cities.
seasofme seasofme 2 years ago
Such a sense of melancholy. Perfectly pictured traveller slowing down at the end of a long day, that most beautiful time of all, dusk...
YaMujahadah YaMujahadah 2 years ago
Nice job done! I've never been to Jakarta but I've been to Bali and Batam and what you've described here really reminded me of my trips there. You captured everything perfectly. It's heartbreaking to see tall buildings and luxurious hotels yet have child beggars roaming the streets...
SapphireStar SapphireStar 4 years ago
I hate Jakarta :P ~especially the traffic and the heat.
but I do like your writing style ^_^d

Where's the next poem?? **grins**