@khassal wattpad will not allow me to copy the story, can you send it over through email to suresh.akanksha@gmail.com? thank you so much:)
@khassal I dint mean it was bad but they were alot of mistakes and stuff (: but it looks like its headed to the climax (:
Really good start. But dear spellings, punctuation and grammar! Run a spelling check once!
Um I like it so far but I would be able to read it better if it had commas and quotation marks around the parts that they talk (:
This is written well. the story structure is really good you have a real talent and would you please let me know if you have any more books? Thanks! -Jezzy
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