WOW!!!! I'm speechless. The only thing that comes to my mind is that u have an amazing talent.
I remain slightly confused as to what all has happened, but I figure you're going to clear it all up. Really excellent, very descriptive writing. :-)
yeahh thi is really good :) it captured my attention straight away. good work :)
Its different from what I've read before. There's a lot of details. I like it. Did he had his memory wiped? It's interesting and mysterious.
I liked this!! It's soooo short though!! I would really love to read loads of this story!! :D :D
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