Very nice, it was gripping from the start I liked the bit with the police officer. the character seems rebellious :) I like it!
Your descriptions are really good and loved the one about the police officer! Lol! :)
You've written a really bold, strong main character, and that really gives an edge to your story. It's a fantastic start. Keep writing! (:
Lianne is so wacky and she never seems to finish her sentences LOL. This was soo funny! XD The details were great and the characters are AWESOME! Good job! :D
really good story, very gripping. was long, but didn't on and on, if that makes sense?x
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