beautifully complex and wonderfully executed. It is rare to find something so contemplative without losing pace and plot. Thank you.
Nice flow! I love the detail! :) I don't really like how long it is, started getting boring, but other than that amazing job! Voted!
Oooo! I love the details, they're nice and I could just picture everything. It flows nicely and you obviously have talent! Keep writing. I give you an A+
The way you write, the things you write about.. it's terrifying and mesmerizing.
I think it was an amazing story. I fell in lov with it absoletly! XD VOTED AND FANNED!!!
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