Where are the Kids?
There is a serial killer kidnapping and killing young children. Detective Al is on the case and needs to follow the clues to save the lives of the next three victims before they are killed.
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ReneCara
Omg!!! Finish this story! It is so exciting! You have so many options to go with! I neeed to know what the kids were thinking and what the cops past was!!
It's really good and I love how the point of view is from the detectives instead of the parents or children
i dont think that the beginning was too fast at all! i think this is an amazing story and i would love to read more :D
Pretty good... You could add some emotional things in from the Dectives pov... and if u r uploading more, the kids pov would be interesting too ;)
come on! you have to continue. it has been almost twoo weeks. this is really good. upload soon please!!
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