She's 11 years old. She probably already forgot about this!... I'll ask her when i get home. Lol
Omg!!! Finish this story! It is so exciting! You have so many options to go with! I neeed to know what the kids were thinking and what the cops past was!!
It's really good and I love how the point of view is from the detectives instead of the parents or children
i dont think that the beginning was too fast at all! i think this is an amazing story and i would love to read more :D
Pretty good... You could add some emotional things in from
the Dectives pov... and if u r uploading more,
the kids pov would be interesting too ;)
come on! you have to continue. it has been almost twoo weeks. this is really good. upload soon please!!
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