Lovely and well written piece! Kind of reminds me of that song..."Beautiful one " by Jeremy Camp.. I enjoyed the read thanks!
I...LOVED...THIS...I won't even try to explain how good it was cuz I won't do it any justice.
This is extremely deep and emotional...it resembles a collision between poetry and a short story with a consistency of beauty. Voted.
I really like this. It's a good start and it lacks mistakes. Elusive, yet at the same time sort of revealing. It's good for a short story
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