I like it so far, though there are issues with the punctuation in the speech. But other than that it's great :) Well done!
It was an enjoyable read. I wish I could get into it, but the man below has me beat on the very intricate parts of the story haha.
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| Name | Gabby Rener |
| Location | In your Computer |
| Member Since | Mar 06, 2011 |
| Votes Received | 230 |