So do you play the guitar or piano with this? :) this is great! I am horrible with writing poems & songs...they r basically the same thing. lol Good job! :)
The lyric is really good. I want to hear you sing it. :)
Can you sing it and share it on youtube? LOL
I love they lyric, it's so romantic.
I especially love the bridge it was really good and realistic. it actually happens to people and you put t into words, which is hard. great job!
It was really good! im not very into peotry... but i love music. i only wish i knew the tune to go with the beautiful words
ooohhhh.....i think this one is my favorite!!!!! it was super pretty and i love the chorus! :)
PS first comment!!!!!!! hahaha :D
wow, this is really good, addy :) do u like to sing too or do u just write lyrics????
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