This is really intreguing so far & your description of the book hooked me right away, good job! :)
Wow! This was..awesome and Very interesting.I'm definitely reading on, just not tonight.
Wow. You can write. What a hook. I am VERY impressed. Rarely do I come across this sort of quality in the SYS Club. Nice work!
This is a short but powerful intro. Since the last 4 lines provide little to no detail that's what makes us read on :D
Great beginning, and I loved the description of your story. Voting and reading the next chapter as requested! :D
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