You Chose The Wrong Person To Kidnap

3 Part Story 1.7K Reads 60 Votes
tifagene By tifagene Updated 4 years ago
Rain Knightly is an orphan vampire. She lives by herself, "apparently" looked after by her aunt who hates her, but likes it better this way. Every night, she goes out to a club, to fight others, but one day, a mysterious boy goes to watch her. And then turns up at her school. His name is Todd, and seems perfectly normal, but what is he really?
ymarocks ymarocks 3 years ago
Love vampires storie n this story goes on my library. Awesome.
Kalyington Kalyington 3 years ago
"I could swim to Japan with just one breath for God's sake." Bahaha, this cracked. me. up.
Anyway, good story, rather interesting and I can't wait to read about the kidnapping and who does it exactly... I want to say the obvious, but I don't  know if it's obvious so... I won't. :P
SabrinaR SabrinaR 3 years ago
I must admit I am a sucker for vampire stories, I absolutely love them. 
This is good and easy to read buts needs more adjectives. Other than that, overall its very captivating. 
SabrinaR xx
AuroraEmerald AuroraEmerald 3 years ago
OMG! Loved it. Great descriptions throughout. Very easy to read and enjoy. *Voted*
SonorousSilence SonorousSilence 3 years ago
W-O-W. I love it :D I love vampire stories :P Great description!
Tazza14 Tazza14 3 years ago
wow!! This is really good! I can't wait to read the rest!!! Voted, fanned and now added to my library :D