You perfectly captured the emotions kids go through after there loved one dies.
Fel sry & bad 4 her .. I too miss my dad badly I can feel her pain :'( :'( :'(
OMG!! I never read something soo short and soo touching before. I was never so into short stories but this was just sooo.....Oh my god, I can't. I loved it, congrats to the author :'( <3
I love it!!! No seriosly I mean it! It's one of the most beautiful things I have read in my hole life it literally made me cry. ;)
Awww, this is just too beautiful! You perfectly portrayed the feelings of a little girl who lost her father. The emotions get through to the readers, something you don't see often. I could almost feel myslef being that little girl, going through what she's going through. Excellently done!
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