Ooo yes, and I love your "external dialogue" too :P (i always forgot to mention the dialogue. why do I do that?)
I loved this chapter. There was fantasy, theft, reality, and even a touch of humor! Great job, and I'm moving on...
@Anahlynn looking forward to your story! If you don't mind check mine out too http://www.wattpad.com/1747712-help-me-think-of-one
Wow, I feel like I'm in an another world when I read this! Great detail and work!!!!
This was really good! Awesome start to a story and it's not something you usually read about which makes it more interesting. Loving it!
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| Name | Anah |
| Location | Colorado |
| Birthday | May 09 |
| Member Since | May 11, 2011 |
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