A child's plea to be heard.
Wow, nicely put together i like how you brought " im sixteen" back at the end of the poem
wow so sad its very good...... i hope some would start listening
I feel all the emotions when I read this story. I absolutely loved it.
Amazingly outstanding. I love the emotions going through the poem! Bravo!
Amazing work. Good rhymes and it really makes me feel like good poetry should.
Strong and meaningful, but amazing. You are truly an amazing writer!