A child's plea to be heard.
ElPoetaSwaby ElPoetaSwaby 8 months ago
Wow, nicely put together i like how you brought " im sixteen" back at the end of the poem
takyrae takyrae 11 months ago
wow so sad its very good...... i hope some would start listening
AnnaaMarieeWood AnnaaMarieeWood 11 months ago
I feel all the emotions when I read this story. I absolutely loved it.
Amazingly outstanding. I love the emotions going through the poem! Bravo!
TearSpoken TearSpoken a year ago
Amazing work. Good rhymes and it really makes me feel like good poetry should.
Tigacat Tigacat a year ago
Strong and meaningful, but amazing. You are truly an amazing writer!