Wow, nicely put together i like how you brought " im sixteen" back at the end of the poem
This was amazing.... You describe exactly how I felt and still feel.... God has blessed you with this great comprehension
The ages are just trying to show that everyone wants to be listened to, no matter their age :)
Loved this poem. Your really talented! Feel free to check out my poem :) (I'm new to this lol)
I wouldn't call it "lovely", but fantastic job of conveying those emotions.
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