intense! REally good descriptions and medaphors! :) it says un-edited at the top,but i did't see any mistakes
very awesome job! love all the details, and I'm wanting to read more! keep up the good work and please keep writing! :D
Wow! The intro was so intense. Continue righting, I'm gonna fan, add this to my library, and vote!
this is really captivating i love how you describe, it makes me want to read more. great job. continue writing + voteeed ! x 4
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