Silent Agony

1 Part Story 221 Reads 34 Votes
AmalJMiller By AmalJMiller Updated 2 years ago
If you ever Lost a loved one, to death, to betrayal, or maybe to just life
IF you ever got your heart broken to a million little pieces
IF your soul ever cried a thousand and one cry 
in silence
with no one to hear you
this Poem is for you ..
azweiris azweiris 2 years ago
What an emotional poetry, I felt like I was the one who's broken... :'( I could almost feel her agony, to be left alone in this world by someone she truly loved. Death is the cruelist thing to separate two lovers apart. Good luck with the Attys, my friend. ;)
WeFanEveryone WeFanEveryone 2 years ago
That was really sad (for the lack of better words). I liked how the one that gave him life was the one he 'killed'.
Melissa_Gray Melissa_Gray 2 years ago
I loved this! I could feel the emotion, and darkness, and it brought tears to my eyes! Good luck in the attys! ^_^

~Melly
raining_rainbows raining_rainbows 2 years ago
loved it.....beautiful and very emotional!
good luck for the attys :D
lee12543 lee12543 2 years ago
I loved this poem. It was so full of emotion. I have lost a love from the cruelty of time so this poem had a lot of meaning for me.
Citrus17 Citrus17 2 years ago
My poem competition closes tomorrow, you got in just in time! This is a very touching poem, my poem book, the heartbroken united is full of stories of lost love, wasted love and mainly heartbreak. Maybe you could take a look, your poem has gone on my favourites list ;)