The Grinning Man

1 Part Story 702 Reads 34 Votes
ElizabethShadow By ElizabethShadow Updated 2 years ago
--The grinning man
He's a sadistic man
He likes to hear us cry

He likes when we thrash about
And beg and beg to die

The Grinning man likes his gun
But has us kiss his knife
We listen to his whispers
Then wish he'd end our life

That grinning man has no name
No face. No love. No sympathy.

Nothing but fame.
Absent of dignity.

That man has for us no empathy.


Little one scream in fear
Grinning man oh grinning man
Don't come near!......--

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xXKitCatXx xXKitCatXx 2 years ago
This seems like something i would write. This is pretty awesome. You should write more like this. I like it. ;) keep up the awesomeness
EVUHorror EVUHorror 2 years ago
@ElizabethShadow I'll be sure to come back and reread it the day you tweak it around then! Until then keep up the awesome ideas.
EVUHorror EVUHorror 2 years ago
There were a few places I would have tweaked the wording so it would flow a little more smoothly but other than that this was amazing. It set a good mood and kept it up throughout the whole thing. I could just imagine the "Grinning Man" as I read this. Definitely going in my favorites reading list!
kickassdaisy kickassdaisy 2 years ago
@ElizabethShadow T___T does that mean...... were back together?!?!? :O YAY!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU MY DARLING!!!!!!!! well.... looks like u and mermaid rapist are sharing me............. SEXUAL PARTY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - dances on pole -
<3
kickassdaisy kickassdaisy 2 years ago
@Mermaid_rapist31 Your mine because Lizzy left me T_T congrats :D get ready for the awesome abuse that is soon to come :P
Love,
The Flower with a Twisted Mind <3
Mermaid_rapist31 Mermaid_rapist31 2 years ago
I wish I could vote more then once cuz i would rape this shit wit votes