--The grinning man
    He's a sadistic man
    He likes to hear us cry
    
    He likes when we thrash about
    And beg and beg to die
    
    The Grinning man likes his gun
    But has us kiss his knife
    We listen to his whispers
    Then wish he'd end our life
    
    That grinning man has no name
    No face. No love. No sympathy.
    
    Nothing but fame.
    Absent of dignity.
    
    That man has for us no empathy.
    
    
    Little one scream in fear
    Grinning man oh grinning man
    Don't come near!......--
    
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This seems like something i would write. This is pretty awesome. You should write more like this. I like it. ;) keep up the awesomeness
@ElizabethShadow I'll be sure to come back and reread it the day you tweak it around then! Until then keep up the awesome ideas.
There were a few places I would have tweaked the wording so it would flow a little more smoothly but other than that this was amazing. It set a good mood and kept it up throughout the whole thing. I could just imagine the "Grinning Man" as I read this. Definitely going in my favorites reading list!
@ElizabethShadow T___T does that mean...... were back together?!?!? :O YAY!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU MY DARLING!!!!!!!! well.... looks like u and mermaid rapist are sharing me............. SEXUAL PARTY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - dances on pole -
                                    <3
@Mermaid_rapist31 Your mine because Lizzy left me T_T congrats :D get ready for the awesome abuse that is soon to come :P
                                    Love,
                                    The Flower with a Twisted Mind <3
I wish I could vote more then once cuz i would rape this shit wit votes