A Beautiful Mess
"I had never thought in a million years that a boy who used to hate me, who used to make me cry, who used to play tricks on me could possibly make me fall in love with him.."
Saydie was only four when Ethan started playing tricks on her: purposely spilling his chocolate drink on her white dress, giving her a slimy lizard at the first day of school, blew her sand castle off and much more.. She was brave, yet she felt that this boy had done enough. When she turned 16, she hadn't expected that a boy like Ethan could hide something from her..
A/N: I wrote this when I was 16 and didn't have the chance to run through it and correct any grammatical mistakes. So if you found any, my bad.
A Beautiful Mess
Copyright © August 2012
thatVanillaGurl
Teen Fiction #670
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BriannaJoMorgan
@BeautifulWishes hey I was just wounder what the song was from the trailer:) ps cute story will keep reading it for sure:))
your cover is awesome!! first impressions count right?? :P right, i need to read now!! :D
First off the cover is beautiful! Your plot is awesome very interesting! good job!
I loved the short sentences, very catchy ones :) I hoped this was longer, cause I really liked it :)
This is great! I love the way you write, its perfect! :D Keep writing, i'll be reading!
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