This is literally so amazing.. Not many people can build suspense but you certainly know how to! I'm seriously jealous of that.. x
Very descriptive! I really liked this chapter and your writing style :D Great job!
Intense! That is a very good opening to a story. That nightmare was like whoah....This was done very well and look like the making of a good read! (:
that was freaking awesome, amazing amount of detail and omg when you said his spine cracked or snapped even I gasped lol great job voted!
Wow, that was really intriguing! O: Keep it up :) it really caught my attention :)
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| Name | Stephanie Brown |
| Location | Florida |
| Member Since | Jul 02, 2012 |
| Votes Received | 383 |