Very deep, very sad so I don't like how this person feels but what I like are the words that clearly portray the pain and suffering.
@Rhymer2 can you check out my stories? They're short, still only have couple parts., like 'Gray Eye Danger' and 'Lies behind Truth'. Please and thank you xD
Wow, I love the last line "Cutting, will never bring me closure". I love the truth to this that not many people consider, and even fewer realize.
It's very compelling, like a long story written as a short story turned into a poem instead. If that makes any sense?
It is what it is, compelling :)
This was great! I love it when a poem tells a story, and a riveting story at that :)
oh... that was beautiful... It's not really the right word, but it's the only one that comes to mind....
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