Amazing piece here, the tones of death and desire I absolutly love it very similar to my own style and it speaks to something in me I just cant fully describe.
Mind-blown. This is such a lovely poem. The emotion was so intense and you portrayed it very well! Good job!
Oh,wow....just,wow.. It took me ages to read this, I am not very good at reading English, but I'm so glad I did it was so beautiful yet scary :)
i could feel the pain you are going and how you are copping with it it was very beautiful
your words reach into depths of body and soul many would fear to tread-- unleashed, raw, not dead at all. ~)K
wow Loved it haha, it kinda reminds me of my poem darkness but yours is so much better :)
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