Smoke me, feel me, release me

Release my pain smoke my dreams away... let me feel it deep inside, your lustful taste of lips... © Donyas, 2012-2013
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Amazing piece here, the tones of death and desire I absolutly love it very similar to my own style and it speaks to something in me I just cant fully describe.
Mind-blown. This is such a lovely poem. The emotion was so intense and you portrayed it very well! Good job!
Oh,wow....just,wow.. It took me ages to read this, I am not very good at reading English, but I'm so glad I did it was so beautiful yet scary :)
i could feel the pain you are going and how you are copping with it it was very beautiful
your words reach into  depths of body and soul many would fear to tread--  unleashed, raw, not dead at all.   ~)K
Speechless..That was probably the most beautiful poem I ever heard congrats!!Wow

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