Smoke me, feel me, release me

11 Part Story 22.5K Reads 1K Votes
Donyas By Donyas Updated a year ago
Release my pain
smoke my dreams away...
let me feel it deep inside,
your lustful taste of lips...

© Donyas, 2012-2013
LeliaVoinea LeliaVoinea 2 years ago
@Donyas superba poezie, am ramas fara cuvinte. Am recitit-o de mai multe ori!
Rebirth_Larz Rebirth_Larz 2 years ago
Amazing piece here, the tones of death and desire I absolutly love it very similar to my own style and it speaks to something in me I just cant fully describe.
weird_bunny weird_bunny 2 years ago
Mind-blown. This is such a lovely poem. The emotion was so intense and you portrayed it very well! Good job!
dancergrl154 dancergrl154 2 years ago
You got second! This poem was amazing and the way you came across was so spooky and mysterious. It really tugged our heartstrings if you know what I mean :P Thanks for entering again! AMAZING!
FireStarter374 FireStarter374 2 years ago
Oh,wow....just,wow.. It took me ages to read this, I am not very good at reading English, but I'm so glad I did it was so beautiful yet scary :)
Jjlynn17 Jjlynn17 2 years ago
i could feel the pain you are going and how you are copping with it it was very beautiful