Love this already! I've never read anything in this style before but the way you write is amazing!
Oh I see that it's a short story now, I just looked at the 27 parts and was like :O sorry :/ love it so far!
This is diffrent.....umm I don't know what to say otherwise. The story seems fast, but maybe cause its only the first chapter.
Well that was definitely unique and different but I loved it. It was really quirky and cool. It was easy and fun to read, so great job :) x
I like the format it is different from anything I have seen. I hop this story does very well for you!
woah, love the way you wrote it :D first off, the cover and title is awesome ^^ sounded good, I understood perfectly! Keep on writing :D
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