District Two

10 Part Story 872 Reads 43 Votes
Stayingforeveryoung1 By Stayingforeveryoung1 Updated 2 years ago
Betrayed that's how it felt, seeing him almost kill me. You've never felt betrayal before believe me its like a monster eating you from the inside causing you to hate and hate only to hate.
RueWriter RueWriter 2 years ago
Awesome!
Some advice- Maybe take more time to develop the characters and their thoughts. It's a little rushed.