District Two

10 Part Story 882 Reads 43 Votes
Jules By Stayingforeveryoung1 Updated 3 years ago
Betrayed that's how it felt, seeing him almost kill me. You've never felt betrayal before believe me its like a monster eating you from the inside causing you to hate and hate only to hate.
Awesome!
                                    Some advice- Maybe take more time to develop the characters and their thoughts. It's a little rushed.