Such an unusual title. I never read something like this before. And how I loved the none-cliche :)
This is Really great, I like how it was funny(: This is A great Story, I cant believe its your first(: Great Job!
Yepp. Definitely a Pinay style of writing. :) I love the unique idea, the boy's vain lmfao. High-five fellow Filipinos! :DD
You write with humour and passion, I really enjoyed reading this, and love your writin style, can't wait to read the second chap which I shall go to now! :)
I love the title of your story... It's really interesting... lol! i smiled a lot and i like the way you write this chapter....
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