Risky Temptations

Jen has everything going for her; a great boyfriend, a great best friend, poularity, good grades, a bright future, but will a new guy at school change all of that? Author's note: Please comment on what you think! or opinions on what u think shud happen next, and stuff like that. thanks!!!
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Great story! It's a great start. I just hope that as you go on with the story you'll make the chapters longer
I like the interactions between your characters. Several grammatical errors found-- I hope you can edit them. :)
It was a good start for them to introduce well. I think it's just fine, the plot, characters, description, details. Just a little more improvement c:
This seems like some other stuff I've read on this site, but with it's own twist. Try to stay away from cliche plot lines, and you'll have a strong story.

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Location Wonderland
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