How I Didn't Get The Romantic Movie Ending

5 Part Story 12.4K Reads 571 Votes
Julia Pearl Meg By juliapearlmeg Completed
This is your classic boy meets girl story. Vincent is sitting at a coffee shop, reading a book. All of a sudden, Harper walks in, dripping wet from the pouring rain. He offers his handkerchief to her, not knowing that it will be the start of their love story. Vince does all the romantic things, like in the movies. But, as said in the title, he doesn't get the ending he expects.
Hahahaha this is so adorably cute :D
                                    But the stars aren't really necessary unless there is huge gap between the scenes
aww ahaha cute meet up... i imagined Vince stuttering hahaha so adorable >.<
Very cute! Vince was so adorable when he started stuttering :P Anyway, great start! Can't wait to see what else is in store. Keep up the amazing work! :)
Hey I think this is super cute! I like Vince already, he sounds like a guy I would like to get to know. And I like the title, it caught my attention.
Hmm... To be honest, I think this kind of story is too mainstream. Still, the beginning was flawless, really neat writing. Well, going on to the next one. Maybe this would turn out interesting.
This is so so good, darling, kept my attention which is hard with my adhd, though few mistakes, makes a stellar book <3 keep writing ^.^ <3 dont forget to check out my two books, much appreciation and love. x