Get those filthy paws off me

11 Part Story 6.9K Reads 138 Votes
keegah By keegah Updated 2 years ago
what if a werewolf story wasn't only about imprinting and finding a mate to love forever what if it revolved around hiding from everyone and falling in love with a girl who hates you? or saving your friends from the evil that lurks behind the trees?
It's good. Expand add more description. It could start with a more interesting hook. You need to try to always pulls your reader in.  You just need to ALWAY put a period before the parenthesis!
I was so confused when your like I'm Jordan... I didn't realise it was in a guys POV! 
                                    Great chappy though... and there is 4 votes so you have to update! :DDD
hehe, it was just a dream, or some really creepy deja vu! love it! <3