This is my first completed story even if it is a short story. And....I need you, the readers, to give me brutal honesty so comment if you like it or not. I just need to know if it is horrible.
This is my first completed story even if it is a short story. And....I need you, the readers, to give me brutal honesty so comment if you like it or not. I just need to know if it is horrible.
She is walking in the dark corridors which are barely lit, the only source of light is the torch light in her hand.
As she is walking she heard someone calling her " Piyali...."
she halted in her tra...