Very nice lenght i can never write anything longer than 2 pages..... very interesting and the writing is great and flows VOTED
You are such a good writer! And I like that your story is long because I like when it actually seems like each chapter could be a real book! good job!
Quite interesting, not a lot of Wattpad stories have a long chapter and I love that about this. I love the characters and the description, good job :)
Great 1st chapter, I liked the description of Simon. The concept overall is really good, lots of mystery!!! Off to read the next chapter!!
Good balance of description and dialogue, I'm almost jealous. ;) And wow, five pages for the first chapter! Okay, I'm definitely jealous now! :D Voted!
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