"Fist into her face to shut her up." omg, that hooked me lmao! You have a really good story here, and It has my stamp of approval and a +vote!
gah, Lia is amazing! shes so funny and mean, but funny! :) hehe keep up the writing!
its an amazing story, love it already! i find your story very interesting and funny great storyline and your writing is very well done! look forward to more :D
...I swear there's nothing offensive in there...I was just editing the text...awk XD
I love your character! She is a definite heroine to your normal girl with alot on her mind. Good plot and dialogue! - voted!
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