Your writing is brilliant, your really talented. I can't imagine what it must be like for Michael to loose Erin. It's a really great job, definitely voting :)
I love this! Hes all jolly and merry taking a potty break and then chaos erupts. Great start to it. :)
What an amazing first chapter, I can actually picture this scene in my head and txhat doesn't happen very often! Well done :)
a great vivd description of how a dad loved her daughter so much. this is nice. you are really great in writing. :) -voted-
The first thing i noticed was the cover, It's really good. you did a great start with this and i cant wait to see where it goes! :)
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