It's an interesting start and seems well written so far and flows nicely! I really like how you presented their relationship at the beginning, I enjoyed it :)
This stuff is not usually what I go for but I really enjoyed it and this is going to get a vote and in my library :D
This is pretty long. That's a good thing, though. Your descriptions are vivid and really paint a picture for me. All n all, great job.
This is excellent, I'm captivated by your writing style! I love how you mix the historical with the fantasy - adding this to my reading list :) Voted!
Wow, haven't seen a story like this for a while on here. Very good, I like your writing, the way you portray things... Good job :)
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