Crystal

1 Part Story 764 Reads 23 Votes
NickUskoski By NickUskoski Updated 2 years ago
An everyday trip to work takes a romantic twist when Susan strikes up a conversation with a mysterious man. But is he everything she has hoped for or is there more behind those glasses?
SheliaStarr SheliaStarr 5 months ago
The humor in the way they converse, they banter, is priceless. Like a real, witty, conversation. Ha! Great.
OwlxMissxYou OwlxMissxYou a year ago
Fantastic!! I wish it was longer though. It could easily be a longer story with more exciting details, but I like where it stops :) It's beautiful
beltzner beltzner 2 years ago
Great short story. As a frequent subway commuter, I really appreciated the details!
HIndia150 HIndia150 2 years ago
Oh my. Such a beautiful rendition of how fate and future collide through little patterns created by light reflected by the crystals.

Splendid.
MyztikalTearz MyztikalTearz 3 years ago
Incredibly thought-provoking short story. It's exactly how I think some days . . . You know, w the what if's. . . In general. Not in a pessimistic nor depressing way :)
ch4rmed ch4rmed 3 years ago
Interesting start so far, I'm curious to see what Mark plans on doing. Nice dialogue between Susan and Mark. The way mark spoke, he sounded so old haha. Almost like an old soul, like someone who has seen and lived it all. Nice :)