The humor in the way they converse, they banter, is priceless. Like a real, witty, conversation. Ha! Great.
Fantastic!! I wish it was longer though. It could easily be a longer story with more exciting details, but I like where it stops :) It's beautiful
Great short story. As a frequent subway commuter, I really appreciated the details!
Oh my. Such a beautiful rendition of how fate and future collide through little patterns created by light reflected by the crystals.
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