The Mer Prince

Zachariah is handsome and different. He pays attention to Gabriella when no other guys do. He stands up for her when her 'friends' decide to leave her. But he has a secret. He also has a guard, Preston. Preston is just as strong and handsome as Zach but he's not the friendliest. It takes him time to warm up to people. What is the two guys hiding and why does he have such a fascination with the shy and quiet Gabriella.
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What's happening with this story? The chapters keep appearing, dissapearing, changing... Can you tell us what's going on?
I agree that this chapter should've been a prologue. It's good but I really liked the original and the way the old story was already going.
couldnt you have put this as a prolouge instead of a new first chapter? its good but i like the old story too
I am confused about the new chapters or something I rlly like this book and want to keep reading it but idk what's going on >.< haha
Zach is freaking amazing like every thing you want ina guy keep writing youre amazing
you call Gabriella "The sweet girl" and "the beautiful girl" way too often. It gets repetitive.


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Name Lindsey Owens
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