Troubled Water

1 Part Story 37 Reads 2 Votes
Jolleyman By Jolleyman Updated 3 years ago
An adventure story about a young man who goes to the Bermuda triangle with his sister to study a mysterious change in underwater volcanoes and ends up deeper than he wishs
MaggieJolley MaggieJolley 3 years ago
Make sure you are proof reading, adding dialogue and explaining things-- where are you? Florida? Bahamas? California? South Africa? How old are you all? Why are you doing it? Where are the parents?? Looking good, keep working!!