Great story. Started of really well and it captures the peoples attention. Makes me want to read more of this. Great job :D
I really love how you started the story! At least you didn't waste time talking nonsense like other writers.... Very well written
This is a really intriguing plot, and it shows great potential. I'm curious to see where you'll go from here =)
your use of dialogue is awesome, everything flows really well. i like the plot as well :D definitely reading on + voted!!
I loooooooove stories like this! Just from the summary and the cover, you can already tell. This is AMAAAAAAAAAAZING! Keep it ALL up! #voted #readinglist
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