Day 25

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Tickling

Title: lol no

Date: 12:01 AM (whoops) 7/12/14

[literally my original idea xD]:

"He smothered me, attacking my sides with his prodding fingers. The tickling feeling flooded my body and made me laugh so hard I started crying and breathing very hard. So hard, I couldn't breathe. Soon I felt like I was choking. "St-top" I coughed out. "St-op-p." then by body when numb. The End :D"

[but a more serious version if preferred.]

"Oh my gosh," my eyes stared in amazement as Yoshi dragged a single banana peel behind him across the Coconut Mall. "How are you doing that?"

"What?" The driver of Yoshi in reality, my best friend James, inquired.

"Dragging that banana peel around," I sat next to him, this was going to take a lot of time and attention.

"Allow me to beat you in a race and I'll tell you." and it looks like a half hour Grand Pix too.

I stood up and fished around for a Wii controller and Nunchuck. "Awh, is your big manly ego sore from losing to a girl?" I mocked a puppy dog face.

"No," he defended and finished in 7th. He turned and smiled at me, "that's not what I'm talking about."

Suddenly, I felt hands grab my wrist and pull me to the ground. Once I was successfully pinned to the ground, he began to untie my shoes. "No, no, James stop!" I giggled as I kicked, making him struggle. "Not the feeeeeeeeeet!" my laugh grew louder as he got the shoe off and began tickling it.

"Oh," he perked up, "no feet? Then how about your sides?" he laughed evilly as his hand plummeted to my waist, squeezing. My laugh grew stronger then ever and a smile grew on his face as he stared me in the eyes, feeding off the life I was expelling. "Oh, you're so cute." This started another laughing fit and it went on until my face was red and my chest was burning. I was purely defenceless, nothing but shortage of breathe to save me from this painful nightmare.

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