Arranged

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Arranged is a story of romance. And with love comes hurt. The author takes you through stories of different people related to one another somehow. 

It's a story of how far people would go just to be with their loved ones. When they would break and just let go. It's all true. Reality.

When I started reading this story, I was amazed at how well she was able to express each and every sentence. Each word having a place in the puzzle. Through words, the author makes you feel the emotions felt by her characters. 

This is a true story for many, whose parents are too controlling, wanting to dictate each and every move they make. It's like they're puppets. It's hard to love someone, and yet be doomed to love another, and the author makes you understand that, and sometimes, you don't even need to read between the lines. She tells you straight out in words that are perfect for the story.

If you're looking for a book of romance, friendship and hurt, this is perfect for you. The words the author used will not only enhance your vocabulary but will also make you want to stay up all night reading it. It captures you, not in an enchanting way, but more of excitement. It keeps you anticipating what's gonna happen next, who's gonna betray who, and who will just let go.

The only thing that concerns me is that the amount of punctuation errors might drive the readers away. I've read hundreds of books and all of them are in such good quality that tiny errors like these annoy me to the point that I get exhausted reading and thinking about how this mistake is not necessary. I'm pretty sure that there are many like me  in this world. I suggest proof-reading before publishing, or getting someone to check it for you, perhaps an editor.

Other than that, I enjoy the book very much, and will read it until the end. Good job, I really love it, and I'm pretty sure your other readers love it too.

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