Author's Note:
This is a short story for a class of mine. I'd love any feedback whatsoever. The workshop we did on it in class came back with one major critique: it needs to be longer. Any tips on where I should lengthen it would be much appreciated since I don't know where to go with that.
Also, I'm not too thrilled about the title. If anyone has any better suggestions, that would be cool too.
Thanks in advance.
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The Human Touch
Teen FictionJai struggles to get a hold on his animal magic, and his self-confidence.
