@nimbasanerd Hm, Okay, Well, You're starting following the plot of the story, right? Because next is that part where Tsunami tells the others the plan - What if you added a choice at the end of that chapter, to escape or to tell Sunny and warn the guardians? From there you've got a basis for the next chapter: Either following what happens or inventing your own outcome (perhaps they chain up all four other Dragonets and you could feel guilty) You could continue this sorta style throughout, maybe? Morrowseer could come, or perhaps you'd already thought of a way to escape and you won't be there. Maybe create a flow chart to see all possible outcomes!
Also, for perspective, I think second person really works, but you could have some other PoVs from the fellow Dragonets somewhere?
